Fire & Ice

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When I look into your eyes,3

I see the fire that binds us 4

closely and makes us one. 5

Blow out the fire and 6

we drift apart like Heaven and Hell.7

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And when you look deep into my eyes,9

You see the ice that holds our love10

together, freezing our chances11

of doubt and feeling heart-broken.12

Melt away the ice and our life13

will crumble around us. 14

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Feeling you close, burning passion16

feels so right.17

One hand up on my face18

and one down around my waist, 19

 I never want this moment to end.20

Swinging our bodies in perfect rhythm,21

our lips lock, entwining into one another. 22

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Holding your face in my hands,24

your bones shift, shivering from my touch25

while I burn relentlessly by your26

gentle and loving touch,27

your skin as hot as raging red hot flames.28

Your hands reach down to my hips,29

embracing them eternally with care.30

Our bodies pressed up against each other’s, 31

the elements collide fiercely and embark us32

for our fantasizing hopes that have long 33

since passed me by.34

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In the heat of the night, 37

the chilling wind blows by,38

the unseen forces making us 39

succumb to each other’s erotic touches.40

As the darkness rolls in, 41

the night cools down and we 42

fall on top of each other43

like a predator and its prey.44

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Glistening eyes flicker cruelly,46

I stare upon you, praying that this will47

not be the last time we shall see each other again.48

Grabbing onto your shoulders, you ponder.49

Hold on now, baby. 50

Don’t you run from me.51

Just let me confess my heart.52

Leaning down, my luscious lips53

brush up against your ear and I say,54

“I love you with all my heart”. 55

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Breathing down my neck like a dragon,57

you whisper back ever so sweetly,58

“As I love you”.59

Despite our fuming love 60

we will always be fire and ice.61

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Author notes

This is for Rikki, whose the happiness in my life, my light in the darkness, and the love of my life. Despite our differences, we are fire and ice. One of us completes the other.

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  • SnickerDoodleCookie
    September 30, 2009
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    Oooh, i love this!!!! awesome poem keep writing


  • lesbian-in-love
    September 30, 2009
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    Very interesting write. Very good. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for entering and good luck to you in the contest.


  • ForestFaery
    September 13, 2009
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    wow seems to be an abundance of romance poems on the site... this is very good thank you for posting it.


  • Foxyn gold member
    August 26, 2009
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    i love it. It is so beautiful.


  • MintAnimeAngel
    August 25, 2009

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    Wow...

    i loved it!!

    the differences and the simialritites between you bring you together.

    i loved the part, 'breathing down my neck like a dragon'- it really makes me imagine a dragon.... and it works in with the whole thing.


  • Hostel
    August 25, 2009

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    Congrats for the throphy.....

    One of the things I liked about this was how you referred to you and Rikki as fire and ice, how he's the fire that keeps you together and you're the ice that holds your love.

    I felt so much emotion while I was reading this poem, like in the line:

    'Feeling you close, burning passion
    feels so right.
    One hand up on my face
    and one down around my waist,
    I never want this moment to end.
    Swinging our bodies in perfect rhythm,
    our lips lock, entwining into one another.'

    And then with:

    'Holding your face in my hands,
    your bones shift, shivering from my touch
    while I burn relentlessly by your
    gentle and loving touch,
    your skin as hot as raging red hot flames.'

    Wonderful imagery, I may say so. I have to say, though, that my favorite part of this poem was:

    'Your hands reach down to my hips,
    embracing them eternally with care.
    Our bodies pressed up against each other’s,
    the elements collide fiercely and embark us
    for our fantasizing hopes that have long
    since passed me by.'

    Everything flowed well, I thought. It was well written as well. Good job.


  • EmotionalxChick
    August 20, 2009
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    Aww this was so cute. I loved it. Good luck ^^

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