Beyond this wooden fence1
Lays the woman I have always loved2
Feared by all who have known her3
She feeds upon their screams,4
A suspended anti Christ halo burns on top of her grave5
To rectify the souls of the damned that now become her slaves6
Beneath the earths molding surface of dust and bones7
Lays a queen in wrestles sleep, 8
As she awaits the nights calling to rise and eat..9
A mother , A lover , And my best friend10
The leader of sacrificial lambs upon the Octobers feast of demons11
She hides in shadows to feast upon your crimson blood12
To bring eternal life back to her wasted and immortal young..13
Her image will be cast upon the world14
By the mortals lies, As they reign upon her grave with fire15
Brimstone will shine through her evil eyes16
And hell will be given life through her desires..17
She will rip the flesh from your bones18
As she feeds from your mangled skull upon her throne19
She recites - A spell of nightmares to haunt you when you are alone..20
Spit of the slithering tongues21
Drown their lungs in your poison22
Demons of the dark23
Rip out their worthless hearts24
Maggots of the decaying dead25
Come fourth and crawl through their heads26
For we are the fear that lives within their scars...27
For those of you who think I'm human28
You have a lot to learn29
I walk amongst you and your enemies30
With a burning desire to feed my queen31
And I give her your pictures32
So she will know who is of the purest human blood33
To feed upon you like a drug....34
Beyond my lovers grave35
Is a queens face etched in stone36
Here is where she awaits the darkness37
Here is her now earthly home...38
Author notes
I chose option 1 my story is about a vampress
The queen of crimson feeders, thank you for allowing me to enter your contest..
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wow, robert, this is awesome. love the descriptiveness.
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wow
~WOW!!! you are such an amazing writer!!! getting a comment from you means alot to me!! thank you for that by the way. I am going to read more of your poems right now!!!
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wow, very nice. great imagery, you have a very nice way of phrasing things. some great pictures popped into my head. thanks for entering and for your comments on my poems, I appreciated them! Good luck!
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I really enjoyed this. It was nicely described and rymed as well. Great job.
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NICE NICE LIKE IT THE THOUGHTS COULD GO ON
VERY GOOD FRIEND -
Wow, that was awesome. nice spell as well. but we shall discuss that at another time.
Hugs and kisses, Lady Raven
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