Lion and Kitty

One day there was a lion who saw a kitty. The kitty screamed "Get in the car!!" To his family. Everyone jumped in and raced off leaving the lion in the dust.

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  • Dual.Of.Fireflies
    August 18

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    MAybe you should put the website you got this off of onto the story. That will make it make more sense. It was cute and all, but I didn't enjoy it. Good luck and best of hopes,
    ~Duality.

  • Sandstorm12234
    August 18
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    I know not the best story.