Bobby sat at the end up the bed, leaning against the wall behind him; his eyes were shut, but he wasn’t sleeping. After a couple seconds with your eyes closed, you can go most anymore. A twitch of a smile came to Bobby’s lips but it faded quickly when a hand jammed itself under his shirt and down his jeans to grab onto his package. Bobby since and his eyes shot open to look at nothing but a far wall, well until he looked down where the hand was, an arm attached and leading to his boyfriend who lay there with his eyes cracked open and a reckless grin on his face.1
Bobby just sat there though, he was use to this, this was ok. Besides, it was Saturday, nothing would happen. The hand jerked itself out and grabbed Bobby’s hand and before he knew it, he felt dick under his fingers.2
“Jerk me off baby.” Said the conveniently half asleep boyfriend.3
Bobby just shook his head and rolled his eyes, starting to move his hand accordingly to Ran’s moans.4
“Mmm fuck… no, no, no, come ere’.” Ran slurred and grabbed Bobby’s arm, pulling Bobby’s entire body closer and half away on to of him when he did. 5
Bobby looked down at him with a weird look on hid face.6
“Humf, I can take that fucking look off your face eh? You wanna get fucked?” he said and right then Bobby jumped and squirmed; he started crying and pulling away and begging, but Ran just pulled him on top of him.7
“NO! p-please, you said you wouldn’t! ple-he-hease, Ran!” he screamed ad tried to topple over but Ran pulled him up by an arm and laid him on the other side of the bed, hooking an arm under Bobby’s legs and somewhat folding him in half and laying him down. His jeans were off in a second, leaving him curled up on his side, half naked waiting to get fucked.8
Ran smiled and lathered his cock in lube.9
Bobby whimpered and thought desperately of ways to get out of this. “P-please, Ran. Y-you said I-I-I didn’t have to t-today, you-you said.” He begged in a small whimper which was cut off when he yelped as the ten inch thick dick squeezed its way into his little tight ass.10
“Ooh god baby you are so tight…”11
He just yelped every time the dick went in, deeper and deeper. Soon he couldn’t take it, he was screaming, a lube lathered hand slapping over his mouth and squeezing his face, but he still screamed and cried as his lover moaned.12
After about a minute, Bobby was bleeding, not a lot, but he normally bled when he was with Ran, and sometimes, though Ran said he was sorry for making him bleed, he thought that maybe he did it on purpose to him.13
“Ooooh ffffuck yeah, mm god your so fuckking tight, oh ggod I could just fucking ram into you all day.”14
Bobby just bit his lip.15
After about six minutes, Ran stopped and pulled up roughly, Bobby wincing at the sound of the smuckering pop when Ran’s dick suctioned out. He hated that sound.16
Ran wrapped his hand around the base of his cock and squeezed a little then went in the jerking off motion, but just warm crimson blood and cum oozed off his cock.17
“Thanks baby.” He said and smacked Bobby’s ass, he flinched and curled into himself, pulling the dirty sheets over him.18
Please, whatever god is out there, just fucking let me die already.19
Author notes
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What a sad piece. God I can see it happening too. It's so real and visceral. The story makes me want to cry too. It's so well written. I didn't spot any errors and the ending was perfect. Thanks for sharing such a dark piece.
~Mab
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Wow... I have never gotten a comment like that before o.o thank you.
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Ummm.
This was, erm.. Interesting... I think the words you use are too harsh - but then again, maybe it wouldn't work without them?
I think this has the potential to go somewhere if you worked on it a bit more. I think this was really rushed - well it seemed that way to me. I think you introduced each idea too early. Maybe you should try describing the characters - their personalities, physical appearance?
I look forward to reading an improved version of this - if you decide to write one, that is. (:
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yes, it was rushed, mostly because i rushed it lol
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pretty fast paced story here...but you should have gone further into telling about the two men...and why bobby didn't like getting fucked by his boyfriend...a bunch of stuff you could do if you decided to further the story...great job, btw...want to read more
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i didnt really want to go into that at all. mainly cause its a true story adn I didnt want to be a shit since the guy already said I could write it down adn post it, i didnt want to explain why he didnt like getting fucked up the ass by a selfish good for nothing boyfriend. it just seemed inhuman.
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dude its awesome please keep going i need to know wat happens to bobby
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uhm... i dont mean to dissapoint, but i NEVER finish my stories lol i barely make two chapters, I write cliff hangers, but i might go on with this one. I have another one that is mecha abstract but really cute that i want to put on, suprisingly, it not a gay rape story ha, but its still good.
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That was aweosme this coiuld really go somewhere
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yeah but... it wont lol
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