Blooded Rose (Prose) [10]

All is quiet within the house
Surreptitiously I sneak out the front door
Knife clutched in my hand I run
Run
Run
Over to the school I hate so much
There they have it
Each girl's face
Name
Adress
And other information
Everything I need to track them down
And kill1

I am able to get inside the office
With a few lock picking tricks
The light is on
Someone must be here
I hold up my knife threateningly
The janitor walks up the hall
Without noticing me
I give a smirk in his direction
And head over to the computer2

It turns on
With buzzing and humming
Before at last showing me desktop
I hack into the private information
And print out all the girl's personal info
Too many for one night3

It's decided now
I start with the A's
And go down the alphebet
The ABC murderer?
No, that's too cliche
Let them come up with the title they like
I will just commit the crime4

Now out and away
From the school I go
Off to become
A predator in te night

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  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    August 17

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    Hello there, Len!

    Well, at least she's on her way. How many kids attend her school? How many will she kill before the authorities catch her? She certainly is a blood thirsty thing, a person after my heart, perhaps literally.

    Andy


    • Len Shadow
      August 17
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      You just can't wait for the murder!
      And there's like 400 people at her school...something like that...That's about how many go to my school.
      The authorities should catch her...eventually.


  • Cecilia Marlana
    August 17

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    I expected as much. This is magnificently written. I loved it. Can't wait to finally hear the despicable details behind the murders..