Heart

Anne met Adam when they were studying in the 3rd grade...1

Some of the students were shifted to a new block and that's how fate arranged their first meeting...though I don't think it was very fruitful as it took them nearly 3 years to start talking to each other...2

They were made to sit together in 6th std and this created a world of problems for them...to start with, they hated the sight of each other...also, Adam had the most irritating habit of biting what ever pen he could find(and so did Anne...so you know what I mean) also, he had the kind of stupid innocence (at least at that time) that can be very irritating at times... whether the problems were genuine or not cannot be said but the mutual dislike at that time was pretty obvious...but this was just the beginning, the beginning of a story that will last a lifetime...it always does...and its the pain that protects the story from oblivion's curse...3

The sparks began to show as they started getting closer...it was all so wonderful...two very different people with entirely separate lives...a very different mindset, opposite ideas...can become such wonderful mates...By the time they reached 8th std...they were well aware of each others feelings...again the whole episode of problems began...4

They were from different backgrounds, afraid to face the truth, not willing to surrender to their need for the other...All through 8th and 9th std, they fought, they made up, they lied, they denied, they feared, they quarreled and they were SAD...5

They went far away, they broke every bond, they left each other but came back...came back into each others lives and promised to never leave again...they came back to stay...to love...to share the feeling that both were experiencing...the pain of separation...the longing to be together...the desire to make the other happy...and the need to feel complete...6

Fate didn't allow them much time...they hadn't been together for an year when they broke up...Anne's confused about the reason but Adam never helped her...He left her to cry...to break apart...He left her and went into his own world which had no place for Anne in it...7

Adam had always said he loved her...he would never leave her...rather he could never leave her...his words mock her on the long lonely nights that she spends missing him...he had broken every promise... everything ...her whole world...that consisted of only one person...that revolved around only one person was now a lie...a broken unkept promise...it only reminded her of her failure, of the undeniable in numerous lies that he had told...8

All she wishes now is to know...the truth...because her whole life was just a LIE...and she is struggling to live with it...her whole world is incomplete without him and she is trying to move ahead with the insurmountable loss...9

A feeling of joy...that at least she had him once, a feeling of complete sadness that she doesn't have him now...the depth of their bond...their love is nothing but a barb, a taunt for her...her life is nothing but the memories of what Had once been... a beautiful picture of what she once had...10

STILL WORKING AT IT11

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Well...This is a true story...and I hope you like it...

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  • November 18, 2005
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    hey...i hope youve read the rest of the part...i've kinda completed it...thrs something missing though...i hope you can help me...anyways...thanks for commenting...!!
    Peace,
    Pragya


  • Rannison
    September 22, 2005
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    A good start. Paragraphing is pretty long, but it doesn't diminish the quality much. Keep it up, I hope to read more soon ^^!


  • September 22, 2005
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    i liked it