I ran across the forest
My shadow is only shown
I don't know where to go
I am running all alone1
I fall and stumble
Running from my fear
But I cannot run away
It is coming near2
I turn around
I decide to give up hope
The beast comes upon me
I don't know how I'll cope3
I'm only a little girl
And the beast is so tall
It's big fat and hairy
I can't see it at all4
It's eyes are so scary
I shiver and I cry
I don't want to die
So why, why why?5
I ran across the forest
My shadow is only shown
I don't know where to go
I am running all alone6
I realize it's the Vockler
The monster who tears you apart
He's got my mom and father
So on me it's going to start7
His claws are upon my skin
I scream and cry and yelp
I don't want to die
I want someone to help8
I ran across the forest
My shadow is only shown
I didn't know where to go
So I ran all alone.
Author notes
Ahaha I did my best this is my first scary poem.
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Was it spooky? Or just....
Comments
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*shudders* i've had a drem like this before
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I like the flow of this poem, it sounds like a song.
beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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Not spooky enough but a great first try.
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Oooooooooooo creepy!
thanks
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spookey and kinda funny
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