Blooded Rose (Prose) [8]

The ring of a bell
Signals the end of class
The end of their lives
Adults need to stay and wonder
Who did this to
Our lovely students?
I'll act with indifference
No one would ever suspect
A thirteen year old such as I
I doubt they would think me clever and capable enough
After all
Aren't a just
A sweet little girl?1

I walk back "home"
And tell my mom I feel sick
You poor dear! Go to bed and rest
Okay
Up the stairs I go
To help with my act
I grab my shapened blade
How precious it is
And lovely it looks
My only loved possetion2

Laughter downstairs
Rings in my ears
Such a disgraceful act
Is what I think
Teens will die today
And you just don't care
You don't even blame me
You couldn't even think
To care for a child such as I
Act like you love me
While you truely dispise me3

A tampered heart such as mine blocks you out
You hate that!
And even more you hate me!
I am not one who could be loved
Nor even feel an emotion such as that
I loathe the very fact
That you even pretend to try
I'll make you rue you ever adopted me
I'll make the bullies regret picking on me
Tonight will be the day I kill again
Such as when I burned my house
Parents and all

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  • Cecilia Marlana
    August 17
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    Beautifully evil. I loved it.


  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    August 17
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    And so we go on.

    She's such a sweet, delicate, angelic, flower. She's been talking about getting the kids at school. Is she going to start?

    p2 [possession]

    Andy


    • Len Shadow
      August 17

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      Is that sarcasm Andy?

      ~Len

      • Andy Stephenson gold member
        August 17

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        Oh!

        Maybe just a little sarcasm. It wasn't meant toward the writing or your plot, I was just poking fun at the character. She's such a lovely creature. Actually, she seems a little lost and sad.

        Andy

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