Why can't you?
Feel the way I do?
Why must you?
Break my heart in two?
How could you?
Step away from me,
When I slaved to change you to this man
Who saw me with no greed?
How could you turn,
On your biggest fan?
Author notes
For poetry contest
A contest entry
- POETRY--II by rinzu.
175 points, ended October 30, 59 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - *Emotions* - I want to read, sleep and breathe them by Melancholic Smile.
250 points, ended August 22, 22 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thats an emotional one...sweet and simple...
good luck
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This is very short but still manages to have a lot of emotion in it. I can feel the pain and love in this poem. I'm not sure if the 7th line works because it is so much longer than the rest but it is still a good short poem. Thanks for entering my contest and good luck
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This is good. I wish you luck on the contests you entered.
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