Blooded Rose (Prose) [7]

The teachers are all
Idiots
All the students
Incompetant fools
No one understood anything
Nothing taught was certain
They all believed to be
"Just and Equal"
To be fair to everyone
Truely they seek to become
"Right and good"
All the same now-a-days1

I walk the halls seemingly normal
Everyone thinks I'm just
That gothic girl
In their minds they don't veiw me as a threat
They picture me as prey
To fill their venimous jelousy
They honestly don't know
What I am capable of
With the silver blade of a blood-stained knife
I know where they live
It's in the school directory
Getting there is simple
Just use your feet2

They tease and humilate but still don't know
I am the one calling the shots
I am the evil that will murder them tonight
I am the one who is
All powerful

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  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    August 17

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    Hi Sierra!

    So everybody is inferior to her. She holds everyone in contempt. Nobody loves her, but does she love or care about anything?

    She's getting ready to kill everyone?

    p 2 [view], [venomous jealousy]

    Andy


    • Len Shadow
      August 17

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      That's what she thinks but not exacly the truth. As I said before, the girl isn't right in the head.

      ~Len


  • Cecilia Marlana
    August 16

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    Very very well written. I read all seven. I do hope you write more. These are excellent. I can feel the emotion pulsing through me and its actually quite frightening. Do I see a female modern Poe?

    • Len Shadow
      August 16
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      These are unedited but I am thinking of publishing them in the style of Edgar Allen Poe. Won't be as creepy as Tell Tale Heart and all those but still going for the fearful feeling.
      Thanks for reading, I approciate the comments!