My contious inside screams at me...
You're wrong!
I am not, I just choose a different path
It differs from the one people take
If they are
"Right"
Or if they are
"Good"
I never understood
Just walked away slowly
F
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Away from the norm
And all that is right and good
I could care less what they say
They never loved me anyways1
Love
Such a strong word
Used too often as it may seem
Love and hate are getting closer together
As this world nears it's demise
I doubt anyone truly knows
The meaning of the word now anyways
False promises like
"I love you"
"Be mine"
Become broken bonds
That lead to heartbreak
Causing people to shatter2
I've been shatters but just now
healed
Darkness keeps shut my wounds
But dies that truly mean
My fragmented heart
Has truely been pieced back together?
Just how is it that one would move on?
I must be truely free
I've told myself that over and over
Hasn't my wish come true?3
Or have the pieces...
That shattered so long ago...
Drifted farther...4
a p a r t...? 5
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Hello Sierra!
This has more self inspection. She seems to be wanting to believe in her chosen ways, but she seems to be having doubts.
She doesn't seem to be killing much, though.
p1 [conscious?]
p3 But [does] that
Andy


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Thanks for the corrections again, Andy. I really need to edit these! XD
She's not killing much now, but will be. I'm setting up the storyline a little bit first.
~Len
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