Missing You

We stay,1

We go,2

Life goes on,3

But must we forget,4

Those that made,5

Our lives so rich,6

The ones that made us laugh,7

The ones that made us cry,8

The ones who lent us their shoulder,9

So we had a place to cry,10

I will never forget,11

Any of my friends,12

And if i do,13

Tap me on the shoulder,14

And say hello,15

I shall remember,16

The days we played,17

The days we cryed,18

The days we laughed,19

Always will i remember you.20

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  • D8TisMeXD
    September 21, 2005
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    Unfortunately, yes, that is true. Its odd how we feel our most emotion when in pain.


  • September 21, 2005
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    most good poems are..

  • D8TisMeXD
    September 21, 2005
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    Thank you.
    Too bad that it was inspired through pain =/


  • September 21, 2005
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    class as in fantastic..

  • D8TisMeXD
    September 21, 2005
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    Class? -.^ <--raised eyebrow


  • September 21, 2005
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    brilliant

    now thats class....

  • D8TisMeXD
    September 21, 2005
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    Thankies ^.^

  • ambros
    September 21, 2005
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    this is such a good poeam keep it up

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