Joyce's story

“ Are you gonna answer me?!” Lulu said.1

“What did you say I didn’t hear” I said2

“ Do you want got to the mall with Trace and me?” Lulu said3

“ Sure whatever.” I said.4

I was at school , Lulu still blabbering about icky Trace. Ever since Trace came back from something, Lulu keeps talking about her, telling everyone that she’s so happy Trace is here, or she might tell you that if you aren’t Trace’s friend well that’s a big mistake, or If you don’t know Trace, call her by her real name TRACY the she’ll spell it out T-R-A-C-Y. She gets so annoying5

“Miss. Joyce are you paying any attention?” My teacher Mrs. Jones asked?6

“ Quit day dreaming!” she continued.7

I- I’m sorry Mrs. Jones”8

“ I’m sending a letter home to your parents. If you day-dream again!”9

“ Ok.”10

“ Now class it’s the end of the day, so don’t forget the spelling bee, and the Mcas is also tomorrow with the book fair/ bake sale/ school supplies tomorrow also.” Mrs. Jones said. 11

I went to the mall with Trace and Lu. Also, I ooohed and ahhhed at the things they ooohed and ahhhed about. I talked about smothering the puppies every time they did. Then, I stopped then Lu then Tracy. Lu asked “ Why did you stop Joy?”12

“ This is boring, just oooing and ahhhing about pretty thing, or talking about how we want to smother the puppies. It’s Laaaaame! But I Joyce right now have $200 on me. Since you guys didn’t ask me if I had any money don’t ask for any. But the funniest thing is that you two asked each other, gosh!” I yelled13

“Well why didn’t tell us how to felt?” Tracy said all innocent .14

“Oh shut up Tracy… Bye I ‘m off to buy $ 200 worth of stuff!” I was so glad that I got that out of my body.15

I bought a watch, something to eat, earrings, real gold rings, seven new outfits, finally a baby blind bunny. After, I went home, my mom asked " How was your day?" 16

" Good." I said.17

My mom continued " I got two calls about you one was from Mrs. Joyce telling me how you keep on day dreaming in class. The other one was from Lulu and Tracy saying that you shouldn't have yelled at them like that and that it's up to you if you still want to be friends."18

" Oh my goodness mom, Lulu is like my bestest friend but ever since Trace came back she treats me like the crust on a sandwich that no one ever eats and just forgets about it. While Trace is the peanut-butter while Lu is the grape-jelly, and I'm just the crust that people cuts off!" I said whimpering and whinning19

" Jo-Jo I bet that Lulu is still your friend she just might be at ease to see Tracy again, now wash up for dinner. Your dad says he has a suprise for you." 20

I went to the bathroom, I washed my face brushed my teeth and put on my "This girl knows best." night gown.21

My dad, mom, and older sister were already at the table. My dad asked: " Joyce shall you do the prayer tonight?" 22

I said "Sure!" "Thank you for the world so sweet,23

Thank you for the food we eat,24

Thank you for the birds that sing,25

Thank you God for everything. Amen." Then everyone said Amen after.26

"So Joyce, I have a suprise for you it's actually two suprises. One suprise is that I have violin for you like you begged for. Secondly, I have a mini motorcycle for you." 27

"Thanks dad. Can you pass me the the french fries and the buffalo bacon shrimp mom?"28

" Yes." My mom said. After I ate dinner Tish ( my older sister) and I said our night prayers.29

"Tish may you say the night prayers" I asked30

" Yeah" she sais31

" Ok thanks" I said.32

I had fallen asleep. The hours pass us as we slept then it was morining. I ate then washed up and got my things ready. I walked to school. 33

Have you ever had the feeling that you know people hate you? Well I did. People were glaring at me they were also acting like they were scared of me...ME! I never in my life fought a person...NEVER I'D TALK TRASH TO ANYONE.... NEVER! 34

Then I seen Lulu with cast on her arm and a bruise on her right eye, and then saw Tracy with cast on her leg and a bruise on her left eye. So I went up to them and asked Lu what happened she responded: " Oh like you wouldn't know!"35

"I don't k-know Lu" I said defending myself.36

"Oh you don't remeber Joy, you beated us up" Tracy said flushed with joy37

" Well you guys must have misapprehended me, where was this person beated you guys up at"38

" You did stupid, at LA CAFE yesterday at exactly 6:23 p.m."39

I left Lu and Trace alone because me and my ego did nothing to harm them phyiscally or by words. If I need my superego to come out of me to to prove that I didn't do anything to them it will.40

Then Elizabella came up to me the she handed me a note saying:41

" UH JOY I KNOW THAT YOU DID NOTHING TO HARM LULU AND TRACY THEY TOLD ME SO...42

IF YOU WANT MORE INFORMATION ABOUT IT AT LUNCH TODAY SIT WITH ME I EVEN HAVE PROOF SO COME43

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  • frenchs461
    November 21, 2009
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    dumb

    boringggggggggggggg that is lame

    beginning: 1, language: 1, plot: 1, ending: 1, dialog: 1, characters: 1.

  • frenchs461
    August 13, 2009
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    cool

    this entertaining to me

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

  • frenchs461
    August 13, 2009
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    There are some mistake