Drench Me (A Poem)

Choke me,
scratch me,
rip me,
tear me.1

Pull my hair,
make me suck,
make me lick,
make me fuck.2

Cuff me,
bite me,
pull me,
jerk me.3

Spread my legs,
rub my skin,
taste me hard,
come on in.4

Drench me,
zap me,
hold me,
pin me.5

Use your tongue,
use your hands,
use your teeth,
lose your pants.6

Smash me,
break me,
drop me,
cut me.7

Take it all,
grab me more,
kill the lights,
and close the door.8

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  • MorbidGarden
    August 27

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    i agree with wickedrose's comment....very rough and wild...great job!

    Take it all,
    grab me more,
    kill the lights,
    and close the door.

    excellent!!


  • WickedRose
    August 27
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    Raw, hardcore, and grind-against-me sex!!!
    I love it...

    ~ Wicked


  • therenaissancegirl gold member
    August 17

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    Dammit, that just got me mad horny. Super sexy; I especially lurved this part:

    "Cuff me,
    bite me,
    pull me,
    jerk me.

    Spread my legs,
    rub my skin,
    taste me hard,
    come on in."

    It made me want my boyfriend to come over lmao great job!

  • tearrsofthemoon
    August 15

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    holy cow! This is amazing. I could feel the passion and deepness of this piece. It rushed me through it, wanting more, longing for more! It was like a pounding heart, beating faster..intensity..like the actual act. Wonderful job. Love this.


  • Queen Mab gold member
    August 13
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    That was so very HoT! Such wonderful intensity. I loved it!

    ~Mab


  • keepItLit9109
    August 13
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    Love it :-)
    Sex sex sex
    It flows so well and has potential to turn people on *cough* *cough*


  • Intoxica
    August 13
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    Sex!

  • Amber Lee
    August 13
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    Very hot and sexy!


  • Play Pretend.
    August 13
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    Dear mother of all salmon. o.o
    That was.... intense?
    To say the least.


  • lavanya
    August 13

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    Hot, hot ,hot!!!!!
    very strong worded and passionate poem, i like the choice of words and sequence..well done , and keep writting.
    p.s. last line is my fav one" kill the lights and close the door."

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