Black Holes

Open with the sun coming up and Erica walking into the kitchen. Michael is cooking breakfast, Erica comes up behind him.1

Erica2

So you can cook huh?3

Michael4

No not really, I just know eggs. Can I ask you something?5

Erica6

Sure what is it?7

Michael8

Why did that sword chose me? I’m no fighter.9

Erica10

That’s why. The Soul Sword picks it’s wielder by how pure their heart is.11

Michael12

But I can’t use it. Last night was a fluke.13

Erica14

That may be true, the sword fed off your emotions. When you wanted to protect me, it activated. That is the key to the Shadow armor.15

Michael16

So that’s it? All I have to do is want to protect something, and boom?!17

Erica18

Well not really. Your emotions call your powers out, but you need to hone your mind. I will train you, show you how to fight. Teach you to focus your thoughts.19

Michael20

I don't think I can do this. You saw that guy the other night? We barely ran him off.21

Erica22

We didn't run him off. Wolf would have kept fighting, if my father had not stopped him.23

Michael24

Your father, you mean that voice I heard was your … Erica cuts Michael off.25

Erica26

Yes his name is Shaw Lo. He is a powerful sorcerer that is bent on…. Michael
Let me guess...ruling the world!27

Erica28

Something like that, he wants to wipe the world clean first though. Kill every living thing, then use his dark powers to remake everything.29

Michael30

See; how can I stop that?!31

Erica32

For now he is too weak to mount an all out attack. That’s why he sent Wolf after you. It took all he could to open a doorway back to this world. I would say we have two months to train and find others to wear the other five armors.33

In Shaw Lo’s throne room34

Shaw Lo35

Void... I summon you!36

A black hole opens and Void appears kneeling on one knee.37

Void 38

Yes lord; how may I serve you?39

Shaw Lo40

I want you to spy on my daughter and that boy. I want to know their every move! I don’t have the strength yet needed to call forth my Despair Knights to crush them.41

Void42

Let me kill them master?43

Shaw Lo44

As long as that boy has that sword you can’t touch them. My power is the only thing that can kill him.45

Den Ron enters the chamber behind Shaw Lo46

Den Ron’s thoughts47

If he is too weak, what would stop me from taking over?48

Shaw Lo’s eyes glow red49

Shaw Lo50

You forget your place fool… Shaw Lo turns to Den Ron and uses his power to push him up on a wall. 51

Shaw Lo52

Just because I am not strong enough to take care of that boy, does not mean I can’t kill you. I gave you only a speck of my power to help me, but do not think it is enough to overthrow anything.53

Den Ron54

Yes master! I’m sorry!55

Den Ron falls to the floor and cowers away56

Back at Michael’s house in the bedroom, a masked woman is breaking in. She picks up one of the crest.57

Erica58

Do you feel that?59

Michael60

Feel what?61

Erica jumps up from the table and runs into Michaels room.62

Erica63

Stop!64

Erica grabs the women and flips her. The masked woman sweep kicks Erica and jumps up. The two woman start to fight and Michael gets in the middle.65

Michael66

What are you doing here?! Who are you?67

Jasmine68

Just call me Black Tiger. I’m not sure how you knew I was in here, but I’m not going to jail!69

Jasmine throws a smoke bomb. Erica grabs her arm and kicks her in the stomach.70

Jasmine71

How are you able to track me?72

Erica 73

You may be able to lower your spirit energy, but not enough to hide from me.74

Jasmine75

Well if I can’t run, let’s see what happens when I raise it?76

Jasmine gets into a low fighting stance. As soon as her spirit energy spikes a little the striker crest starts to glow.77

Jasmine78

What is that thing?!79

The crest levitates, and then shoots at her. It locks onto Jasmines arm. Michael has an amazed look on his face.80

Michael 81

But she’s a thief… Before he can finish, Jasmine moves around him and throws him at Erica.82

Jasmine83

I’m not sure what this is, but I am sure I can get a lot of money for it.84

Jasmine runs for the front door; she slips out of the house. Michael and Erica give chase through the woods, unaware they are being watched from a black hole in the sky.85

Void heads back to Shaw Lo’s stronghold. He walks into the throne room. Shaw Lo has just finished dispatching Den Ron.86

Shaw Lo87

You have something to report already?88

Void 89

One of the crests has bonded with someone. A girl; she is running from them though. I do not think she is with them.90

Shaw Lo slams his hand on his throne91

Shaw Lo 92

Void, you may get to have some fun after all. Trap the girl and steal the crest!93

Void94

What do you want me to do with her after I get the crest?95

Shaw Lo96

Do with her as you wish… Shaw Lo lets out an evil laugh.97

Void98

Understood99

Void walks into a black hole and it closes behind him.100

Cut to Jasmine as she makes it to her car on the main road. A black hole opens and sucks her in. Jasmine is now standing in Void's dimension with a stunned look on her face. Void comes through the ground with his arms crossed.101

Void102

Welcome child.103

Jasmine104

Who are you?105

Void106

Your executioner…With that he pulls out a two sided axe and throws it at her. Jasmine back flips, then (throws three throwing knifes) that deflect the axe, and it returns to Void. 107

Void108

Very good; now try this… Void jumps into a black hole and others start to open. His axe comes through a hole behind Jasmine. The Striker crest lights up. A chain with a grappling hook comes out, and grabs the axe and throws it into another black hole. Void then drops out of a hole above her head and slashed at her. Jasmine blocks with the steal guard on her arm, then takes a few steps back. Void sinks into another hole and comes out of one across the dimension from Jasmine. He pulls out another axe and laughs.109

Void110

Your luck has just run out little girl!111

Michael and Erica make it to Jasmine's car.112

Michael113

Where is she?114

Erica’s Night Hawk crest starts glowing115

Erica116

Void has her!117

Michael118

Who is Void?119

Erica120

Another one of my father’s generals. We have to go to his dimension if we want to save her. But she may already be dead.121

Michael122

How can we go there?123

Erica starts to chant and puts her hands together. Her eyes start to glow and a doorway opens. She grabs Michaels arm and they run into it.124

Cutting back to Void and Jasmine, Void throws his second axe into a black hole beside him and charges Jasmine. Right when he is about to cut her, Erica comes through and grabs his arm. She moves it to block the axe that has come out right beside Jasmine's head. Void frees himself and kicks at Erica’s head. Erica ducks and hits him in the chest with a force blow pushing him back.125

Void126

The traitor shows herself! Now I can kill all three of you!127

Shaw Lo128

Void return now!!!129

Void 130

But master!131

Shaw Lo132

Do not question me!133

Void 134

Today is your lucky day…Voids second axe returns and he jumps down a black hole. Erica, Michael, and Jasmine are now standing in front of jasmines car. Erica turns to Jasmine.135

Erica136

You have to come with us!137

Jasmine138

I’m not going anywhere until someone tells me what’s going on? Who was that?139

Erica140

That was Void. A general for Shaw Lo.141

Back at Shaw Lo’s stronghold Void is in the hallway. Shaw Lo walks up to him. 142

Shaw Lo143

I asked you to kill one person; now tell me why should I keep you alive? 144

Void145

I would have had her if Erica had not stepped in…Shaw Lo shoots an electric charge at void bringing him to his knees.146

Void 147

I’m sorry master. 148

Shaw Lo149

My former daughter is starting to become a problem… Shaw Lo puts his hand down and starts to walk down the hall.150

Shaw Lo151

Void you may go!152

Void fades into a black hole.153

Shaw Lo’s thoughts 154

I did not think I would have to call in silent strike so soon…Shaw Lo’s eyes lower 155

To be continued 156

Author notes

This is the second script to The seven Shadow Riders posts. If you do not want to be lost then you may want to read them.

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  • LdyBrknWing
    August 12
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    Great Job!

    Robin, you really did tremendous work, here! The storyline is really good, and is a perfect continuation in your Shadow Riders series. I think this will work really well for either an animated format, or a comic book series. Great detail in the fight sequences, and altogether, just a really good job! Super-d-duper!

    Paula