The trees

Trees are amazing,1

Made of wood and bark.2

They're very strong,3

And face nights of dark.4

Stuck to the earth, 5

Can't really move.6

Waves their branches,7

To the wind's special groove.8

Kids like to play,9

In these wonderous things.10

Might build a tree house,11

And pronounce themselfs kings.12

They are taken for granted,13

We don't seem to notice.14

They can be a home to,15

A little green lotus.

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  • andhearts. ox
    August 22
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    quite nice


  • DemApples
    August 16
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    wonderfully splendid


  • DragonFire-
    August 11
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    I LOVED this i am so bookmarking it
    I cant wait to hear more poems from you.