I woke up to the sound of her beautiful voice telling me to wake up. The blood began to drip my face as I noticed the scratches on me and her. I’ve only been out for a few minutes, but I know what we have to do. So, I grab our katanas from the back of the car and start moving up a hill. We have to make it to the Paradise Fields. She helps me out of the car as we run towards the field that is just over a hill. We run up to the top of hill, only to see our comrades already dead, except for one. I look at one of them and see that he’s still alive, but barely. He looks at me and begins to mumble some words that I don’t understand. I walk a little closer as I become overwhelmed by grief at the site of my friends and comrades lying dead in Paradise Fields. Suddenly it comes to me, he said “Run.” I quickly go in front of my blue eyed girl as the blast blows us down the hill. We tumble down the hill until we each hit a nearby tree. I hear them jumping from tree top to tree top and realize that they want to finish the job. I grab my beautiful blue eyed girl who was now even more bloody just like me. The blood seems to dropping down on my face, so she affectionately wiped it off with a faint smile. We begin to run down the hill as I hear them trying to get closer to us. My blue eyed angel gets out of my arms and begins running along with me. Then we both move behind different trees with our backs to the tree. They know where we are and from the sound of it. Their’s probably four of them. I look into her blue eyes with the same determination to live as she has. 2
I take out my sword and stand ready for anything that may come my way. A dagger is thrown at my tree, but I know that its more than a dagger. It’s a bomb. I quickly move out of the way as it blows the tree in half. The light from the bomb was enough to allow them to see me clearly. Suddenly tons of ninja stars head toward me. I close my eyes and as I open them my irises split into three dot shaped pieces that form a triangle. I look at the ninja stars and they seem like nothing as I jump at the right angle in the air which makes them all miss me. Fools, I laugh to myself. They can’t beat one of the realized. Three come at me at once with ninja daggers from the air like birds attacking a worm. The fourth must be looking for my blue eyed beauty, but he’ll never find her. She’s too good, if she wanted to...she could of been gone without a trace. I blocked two of their attacks and barely dodge the third ones attack. The two have locked swords with me, so that I can’t get away. Damn it. The third one must be smiling since he’s behind me. He prepares to stab me in the back, but I quickly slide my sword off their daggers while turn around in mid-air and kick them with both feet in mid-air while stabbing the man behind me. The two ninjas in front of me attempt to stab me while I get up, but their struck dead in the back of the neck by my blue eyed beauty’s small daggers that she kept in case of an emergency. I look her at her and she smiles back with her blue eyes sparkling in the night sky. Suddenly her blue eyes look in horror as she sees something behind me. She runs up to me as I turn around to see a fifth man. The man who we should of run over. His dagger became inches from me as she suddenly appears in front of me. I hear a faint sound come from her mouth as the man tries to move away from me, but I stab him through the neck with red hatred in my eyes and finish it by cutting off his head.3
She wobbles backwards a little, but tells me not worry as she gently and lovingly touches my cheek. She falls backwards and I caught her on her way to the ground. She laid on in my lap with a small smile on her sad face. I began to gaze into those beautiful blue eyes of hers, something that I’ve done many times. But for the first time I’ve realized how truly beautiful they are...twinkling in the night sky like a bright shining star. A star that keeps guiding me home to her. I brush my hand through her beautiful silk like hair as she gives me a faint smile that gives away how tired she really is. I held her closer for I knew that my time with her short. It should of been me and not her. She asks for one last kiss as I kiss her beautiful lips, a tear falls from my face and hit the soft wet ground of the forest. As my lips part from her, I realize that she’s dead. I close her beautiful colorless eyes. I stand up carrying her into her car as I find a man who had been hit by her dagger. He was still alive, but paralyzed from the neck down. I stomped on his face and asked him to give me a name. He laughed at me with a cackle that made my blood boil. I shouldn’t of expected a word out of him, but he said something that made me want to kill him, “It was Davidais...your brother.” I should of known...she shouldn’t of been involved...Brother, you’ll pay for all you’ve done. I looked at my beautiful colorless eyes angel and said to her that I wish I could of seen her in heaven one day, but for what I’m about to do...I’m going to hell. I’m going to kill every damn person that gets in my way. They’ll pay for what they did to my friends and It will be a bloody road, but its my last act as the captain the assassin squad known as The Lone Wolves. As I began walking away, I realized that I was preparing to go straight into hell itself.4
Author notes
This one...I think it starts off really well, but I'm not sure about half way...after half way its good...but not as good as I wanted it to be. There will be a sequel that will explain almost everything and that is rarely seen in my short stories. It will tell you why they were after him. I may even tell you their names. Why did his brother betray him? So I hope those of you that enjoyed this one will like the next installment and the sequel to this, since the sequel will be done with two point of views. By telling you how the protagnist in this and his brother, Davidais view the confrontation...IN FIRST PERSON DUN DUN!!! And what is realization? How did he attain this power?
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Wow- this was very very good! It was so bittersweet- I loved it... I was hooked on the story all the way through- the only part that was slightly choppy, confusing, and inconsistant was the actual fight scene- I understood most of it, but there were some parts I had to reread to get... it was the way you worded some things that threw me off ever so slightly- but that could have just been me. You are getting really good- improving with every story. I'm not kidding when I say I truly enjoyed this one. Keep it up Sebass! I look forward to more
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