Egg or Potato?!?!

Hey dude1

-cry- hi2

um, what's wrong?3

some kid at the park called me an infected egg4

um -nervousnessss- oh um... ur just a special egg...5

OMG U JERK IM NOT AN EGG!!!!6

ur not!??!?!?!?!?!7

NO IM NOT!!!!8

-gasp- uve been living a live u poser!!!9

no i haven't!!10

then wat in the world are u!?!?!11

a potato...12

-gasp-13

-gasp!-14

-GASP!!!!!!!-15

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~TO BE CONTINUED ~

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  • The Puppeteer silver member
    2 days ago
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    LOL! I love it at the end when all the random people come in and start going "gasp!" Nicely done!


    • Paigie
      2 days ago
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      Yeeessss... this is what happens when I'm bored... XD

      Paigie


  • Backward thgindiM silver member
    February 24
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  • Kismet Krazy
    November 25, 2009
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    Hahahahaha. Very Unique. I liked it. I too wish there was more to it. This was very funny. good job.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Melissa HoneyBee
    November 5, 2009
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    Original. I like. I wish u added some more. Love the emoticons and concept.


  • shtwyturtle
    August 12, 2009
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    Hahahaha, very good. Good luck in the contest, Queen Betkins II had a laugh.

  • Paigie
    August 11, 2009
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    hurrraaaayyy people liked my story


  • livelaughrock
    August 10, 2009
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    wtf lol??? INFECTED EGG!! lol nice


  • Asfand
    August 9, 2009

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    HAHAHA! Wow, this was a nicely surprising story! Love the use of emoticons and it all adds up to a funny story! Nice, I enjoyed reading this!


  • ForgiveAndRemember gold member
    August 9, 2009

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    infected egg-hahaha that was funny dude!!! *gasp**gasp**gasp* lol ITS A POTATO???? *cries* my whole life i thought it was an egg hahahaha that was funny dude! It was really funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you have any other emoticon stories? If you do I will read em hahaha I liked reading this and my dog (Miley) liked it too...I think anywayz

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