Coffee in bed (part 1)

"Baby, I'm ready." Opening my legs to reveal my throbbing wet place. "Take me papi, I'm yours" Just when you would slide in I'd pull back. "Now now, you KNOW I love to play." You got on your knees in the bed as I crawl  over to your 'friend'. Licking the tip of it then slowly putting it deep in my mouth. I pull back enough to suck the head and all its precum. Then I put it back in my mouth and hummed. The vibration was powerfull. You tilt your head back savouring every moment of it, til you couldn't take it no more. "Mami, allow me to return the favor." You pushed me down on the bed and worked your way down. You bit and sucked my neck hard. My voice came out in whispers, "No fair, I didn't bite you." You smiled at me and said, "Yes you did mami. My friend is a bit sore." Then from my neck  to my navel, you traced the fine lines of me. With a wide grin you asked, "Well well, what do we have here?"  You took a finger and slipped it in. I almost moaned from the feeling. "Aye mami," you moaned, "Your so hot your burning my finger."1

You pulled out your finger and sucked the juices off it. "You taste so good mami," you said. You put you finger back in. With a coy smile you asked, "I wonder what would happen if I were to push this 'button'?" "Don't you da..." I threw my head back as you played with my clit. The more you pushed it, the hotter and wetter my place became. "Whats my name chula?" you asked me. I didn't say anything. You put on your sexiest smile and pulled your finger out. Before slipping it into your mouth, I grabbed it and sucked all my juices off, letting a soft moan escape my lips. "Aww chula."2

You nudged my neck and bit me hard. Then you whispered to me, "Hang on mami." You took a hand and held your 'friend' up, and took the other one to guide me onto you. The feel of you going in me caused me to dig my nails into your shoulders.  As I began to ride you I could feel your nails piercing my skin, and that set me off. While riding I bit your neck and kissed you hungrily. Nothing but moans, growls, and howls escaped our lips. You pushed me on my back and pumped me hard. I growled and clawed your back, "Aye papi, thats how I like it!" You grabbed me and picked me up. You walked to the wall, put my back to it, and went back to pumping me. You rammed me so hard, the wall started to dent in so you stopped and let me down. "You shouldn't have let me go papi." I hopped to the bed and started rolling around, purring. Then I arched my bunny in the air. "Come and get me. If you can." You came up behind me with that smile. As soon as I felt your hand, I jerked forward turned and bared my teeth. "You didn't think it was going to be that easy, did you?"3

You smiled at me and shook your head. "Always gotta learn the hard way, eh chula? You can't beat me." I giggled "I can try, besides I like to play ruff and dirty."  I layed out and took you in my mouth and sucked it like suckin a dripping ice-pop. Before you could grab me, I let you slide out and sat up. I put my arms around your neck and my left leg around you, and started to pole dance on you. I let you go and stood on the bed dancing and rubbing my self. I started crawling on the bed, you joined me. I turned to you baring my sharp (now) fangs.You spoke. "Mating season makes things so interesting, why don't we take this otuside?"  I looked around then smiled, "The night air would be good." We both got off the bed, walked down the stairs, walked through the kitchen and out to the backyard. The gass was moist and cool, the stars littered the sky and the moon. The moon was full. "Are you ready?" you asked me. "I'm always ready." Then it began.4

We stood facing eachother, and without any warnings we bit into eachothers flesh. Then we let go. "Well well well chula, I didn't think you catch me so fast," you said with a coy smile.  I smiled back, "The first one to moan or show their belly loses."  A whisp of wind blew, and it looked as if you grew a bit of fur on your skin. I knew this was going to be good. We both took three steps then bit into eachother again. You had my neck and I had your ear. You started sucking away. I lit go of your ear and bit into your shoulder. You were still sucking away, then you started palming my place, so I took my hand and started playing with your balls. I whispered in your ear, "Aye papi, you taste so good in my mouth." I rubbed your hard 'friend', licked your neck and blew on it. You finally let me go and steped back. "Couldn't take it anymore, could you papi?"  Instead of stayin in my spot I steped  forward. The next thing I knew, your fingers were in me. I clenched my teeth togather to muffle the moan of shocking pleasure. "Tsk Tsk mami, you fell right into my trap." Your fingers moved wildly in me, just the way I like it. "Fine, I'll just have to work harder then." I squirmed out of your grip, both hands to my side and steped back. I stooped down and streched out in the grass, then I arched my butt in the air and started meowing and purring. I stopped and stared at you, so I turned around and meowed and purred again but this time I was fingering my self.  I could tell your were trying to resist the urge to pound me right there. I flipped my hair back and looked at you licking my lips. "You seem adazed my love, what stops you from taking me?"  I took my fingers out and sucked them. Then I stood up, butt first then my head. I turned around and walked to you. 5

Remembering what happened last time, I stopped just a foot in front of you. "Why do you wait? You could have had me," I said with a coy smile. You smiled back, "I know, it was quite tempting, but its so much more fun to watch you squirm and try to fight back." Then you laughed. I looked at your friend, who was standing at full attention, and walked closer so I could grab it. Then I couldn't contain myself. I dropped to my knees and began to suck away on it. You almost fell over. I could feel your whole body shaking as you struggled so hard not to moan. I could care less about my moaning, but I still tried not to. We could only take for so long. Then you came in my mouth, I came on myself, and we both moaned. You droped down to my eye level. I was licking my lips and breathing hard. You said, "Turn around." I silently complied. You grabed my hips and slid yourself into my soaking hot place and began to pound me furiously. I howled. You howled and pulled at my hair. You bit me. I clawed the grass trying to catch my breath. Then we both moaned and screamed, we were almost there. We finally came in unison. You pulled out and layed down next to me. I was laying on my back trying to breath. I kissed you on the cheek. "Thank you, lover," I whispered. You took your arm and wrapped it around me and said, "Welcome, and thank you." That night we slept under the stars, in eachothers' arms. This night will burn in us forever.6

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  • DepressedMemory
    October 10, 2005
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    your the best at this form it makes me soo horny


  • Wolf-Gem
    September 30, 2005
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    Thanks. It is hard, I'm still getting use the form.


  • Sensual Sapphire
    September 29, 2005
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    Erotica is hard to do well with out making it the same stuff done over again. You did well, the animalistic quality was a nice touch. They must be in a place that's as hot as the story because sleeping outside would get cold. I hope to see more from you!

  • Goddess of Roses
    September 16, 2005
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    *gasp* how hot and steamy. damn!!!


  • Wolf-Gem
    September 16, 2005
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    I should have double checked my story. I'll fix it!!!!!

  • They Call Me Fancy
    September 16, 2005
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    I think this wasn't to bad. One thing that irritated me was "bunny this and bunny that". I think since it is an erotica story, That it came off alittle immature due to all the "bunnies". But with that aside I thought the story was pretty warm, Could have been hoter if only the bunnys didn't polute the story. Good job though .

    ♥ Fancy

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