a dream never forgotten(part 1)

a dream that had never been forgotten. a dream always told. it is now back and even more to hold. i know this is a stroy about a dream. but it seems that i am rhyming more than it needs. this is the dream that hasnt been forgotten. i am in thw woods with my mom and we are running from something and i dont know what. i am running beside my mom screaming and panting. my heart beats faster as we run. i am wondering will we escape. we stop for a minute once we lose the creature what ever it was. as i turn my head away from my mom i hear her scream i look back and she is gone. as i look to see what had happend. i see a braclet with something on it. i pick it up and look at it. it has my name on it. i look at the letters and think what does it mean. i put it on and walk on. i look for any sign of my mother. nothing not a trace. i get to a cliff and i stand there looking then i trun around. i look at a limb i see something on it. a necklace with my name on it as well. a silver heart. on a chain. i didnt know what is meant but i was wanting to know. then i went back in the woods i seen something move. i stopped in my tracks and looked. i seen red glowing eyes in the bushes. i screamed and ran. for i knew that is i stayed i would have been dead. i rush out of the woods and back to my home. i look out the window then i see...... (alarm clock goes off) darn it i say i could have finished it. well i guess it will continue soon enough or will it. maybe there isnt an end .(goes back to sleep) i look out my window there it is. oh my gosh it is hiddeous. as i stare at the creature i look in fright at what an ugly sight. i turn my head and it runs to my door. i look and it opens . it comes toward me and hands me something and leaves. i open it up and it was a note. from my mom. it said. i love you remmeber that. i looked at the words and cried. for then i knew she had died1

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this is a dream i had and it never leaves

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  • heartofpainfultears
    September 15, 2005
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    i know you will arron love ya

  • heartofpainfultears
    September 15, 2005
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    i love you like a sister too

  • inner reflections
    September 15, 2005
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    damn....i wish i could be there to give u a hug....damn i'll always be here


  • TorturedLifeandSoul
    September 15, 2005
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    wow Elizabeth. that had to be the scariest dream you have ever had. i'm sorry that you keep having that dream about your mother. i know it must really hurt to wake up and know she isn't there. i hope you're ok. i'll give you a hug at school tomorrow. just remember i'm always here. ok? well good poem. i love you like a sister.