silly clouds

up up in the sky above
the clouds sing1

pretty blue
pretty blue
they croon 2

clouds love to sing
never is it about important things3

the world cries in pain
cities are pillaged
and the clouds sing about blue4

adventure rarely happens
in the big blue sky5

vroom
the sound of a man-made bird screams
cutting violently through the songs6

ahh!
the clouds flutter away
from the fright7

little people in the little plane
all giggle in delight
as they tear through clouds8

the clouds don’t sing anymore
as they hang limp in the big blue sky9

(the moon&the earth&the stars laughs
for they’ll never have to hear the clouds
sing pointless songs again.)10

Author notes

Pointless poem. I always wondered what the clouds did for fun.

Humans: 1
Clouds: 0

The point of this poem is that humans wanted to get back at the clouds. :] Guess it didn't come across really well.

DEDICATED: Cloud watchers. We still love you even though we know that clouds are silly.

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  • rustic
    August 8

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    hmm

    for me it was more like a story because it didn't really flow for me but Im terrible at poems so I dont know the standard, sorry :[