Craving to keep my hands busy doing something very natural is every man's dream...welcome to my imagery now'lets indulge.....1
"Lay back you big stud as I undress you"...button after button
revealing that chest; unbuckling a belt and sliding down this zipper on my way to the promised land. I lean in and kiss the pluse of his neck and his jeans fall off. Tiny nips, licks on each lobe; my breath blows softly over his ears. 2
I feel his fingers in my hair pulling a salacious slant in place.
Tongue's dancing moist, frantic he takes my clothes away...We tremble, and I start to belly dance while locked within his
heated embrace. 3
Placing my foot in the crotch of the fallen pants
he steps free of there confinement. Pulling me closer; his man pride is crushed betwen the two of us throbbing in unison with my heartbeat and exquistely formed. I stradddled the love muscle of passion in undeniable hunger. He slides deep, deeper to the hilt of my heated bum. Making me squirm as his delicious cock
hammered fast with a honey-sweet vibration as he released his wad..... 4
I heard a guttural groan as I licked his throat. He grabbed me by my ass and pumped even harder. He held on "please...please.....
please..... you have always belong to me!" Those were his last words before sleep claimed his sated soul.
Author notes
just a love scene from a book am writing
Is it sexy enough?
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wow
nice warm and delicious slice off the man woman interaction -
If I revised this work?
If I revised this work I would change the fact that I'm a man because men can't write this kind of stuff, it has to come from a woman. Anyway, my thoughts
Craving to keep my hands busy doing something very natural is every man's dream...welcome to my imagery now'lets indulge.....1
"Lay back you big stud as I undress you"...button after button zingz open
revealing his chest; unbuckling his belt, I slide down his zipper on my way to the promised land. Leaning in I kiss the pluse that throbs in his neck, his jeans fall off and hit the floor with relief. Tiny nips and licks attack each lobe with hunger; my breath blows softly over his ears, my nipples are errect and hot. 2
His fingers pull my hair into a salacious slant, Hmm saliva drips from the crook of my mouth, his fingers finds the right place.
Tongue's dancing franticaly as he takes my clothes away... Moisture flows in all directions, we tremble and I start to belly dance while locked within his
heated embrace. 3
Placing my foot in the crotch of the fallen pants he steps free of there confinement. Drawing me closer; his man pride is crushed betwen the two of us as we pulsate in unison. My heartbeat exquistely tuned to his as I straddled his love muscle whose passion cried undeniable hunger. He slides deep inside, then deeper to the hilt of my heated bum. I squirmed as his delicious cock
hammered fast with a honey-sweet vibration as he released his wad..... 4
A guttural groan licked at his throat, he grabbed me by my ass and pumped harder and then even harder. He held on "please...please.....
please..... I screemed you have always belonged to me!" Those were his last words before sleep claimed his sated soul.
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No that's what I like
There is nothing better than a good sexy write written from the passioned heart of a woman who knows what sex is all about even if it's just a wish.
Nice work -
Sexy enough....
I'm coming....to the nearest book store....good details!!
beginning: 3, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 3, characters: 3.
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Delicious!
Mmm! I enjoyed every single word
of this wanton sultry write.
such decadence and passion that
tease the palate with lustful
succulence. Mmm darling! you
have aroused my libido. Superb!
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