For your eyes only,1
I don't know how to describe how i feel for you, because words would not do my emotions justice. So i thought about a more permanent fixture and this is what i thought.2
You are the air that i breath, the eyes that guide me to see, the mouth to give me the confidence to speak. You are the ears that listen to my problems and you are the friend i always needed.3
As i glide from class to class in a typical school day, i look to see if you are watching me, looking for me, knowing you feel the same. Whenever I'm near you i just want you to take hold of me and cradle me in your arms.4
You deep blue eyes shimmer beauty in the light and when you stare deep into my eyes i feel my legs start to shake. My heart starts to melt and all around me turns to nothing.5
Your smile makes me smile as though a silent connection brings us both to the same state. When you talk to me you talk to me as a person, not just this "fling" that means nothing. 6
When i am with you i feel a whole as though you respect me for me. You call me beautiful and say all the right things. And because of this at times i think to myself, wow can it all be this perfect.7
When you take hold of my hand in a friendship sort of manner, it lingers there for just a second more. A second that i notice. A second to signify you feel the same.8
Whenever I'm lonely or feel down thoughts of you come racing through my mind and a small smile appears on my tear-stained face. Then when you take me into your arms i feel comforted and sheltered.9
I'm writing this letter to tell you how you make me feel. How i love how you whisper in my ear and gently intertwine your fingers with mine. I wanted you to know your the one who's always there for me and makes me feel special when i least expect it.10
I need you to know i love you and i know i don't say it enough. I want you to remember that no matter what happens I'm always here for you.11
Love 12
Julie xXxXxXx13
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I have read this before and I remember commenting on it...I know I have read this before at least. Thank you very very very much for entering good luck
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again another one of those typical love letters, although i'll admit this had a difference, i liked the way you admitted to see if he looked at you in that way but sadly the whole 'you are the air that i breath' thing kinda makes me feel sick, even if i do write it myself, but hey...you asked for a critical review! lol, anyway best of luck in the contest! l8az love ya sky xxx
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...wonderfulness...i really enjoyed it...i love how you dont just say that you love this person, but you explain every little detail why you love this person. It is so sweet and esaily-relateable....wonderful...
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NiKKi
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it made me homesick for mi amante
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What a wonderful story. It reminds me of my own love for my fiancee. It is amazingly written and a beautiful read.
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Aww hunni this is really sweet, I love the way you opened up in the story and how you notice almost everything about this person good luck in the contest lots of love Dazz xxx
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