In the afterlife

As i was born again I felt hands tugging at me but yet i still wouldnt let go of my sweet angel. not now and not forever. i think she feels the same way because i could see her trying to hold on with her last breaths so she could come along with me into the afterlife. I chuckled at the sight of my limb body and hers draining. 1

Sadly, she failed to hold on and my body became more limp as my spirit started to slip away. She was pulled away to an ambulance. I struggled but failed as she was given oxygen and taken to the nearest hospital. 2

It wasent supposed to happen like this. We were supposed to 'run off' together. To finally be happy. Be free. Be together at last. She's going to hate me know i thought. The last thing i see before I finally leave this world for goor is the face of my beautiful angel. Stuck here on earth.3

"Cry as I may these tears won’t wash you away"

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  • Ks xD
    October 18
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    Wow this is good (:


  • cutsherself
    September 25
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    intersting i like it continue

  • um ok so let me get this straigh...
    theres this lovers who r planing on kill themselves together so they could be free together, but the boy makes it n the girl doesnt?
    like the boy dies n the girls lives?
    xD correct me if im wrong >.>
    but rlly i like it, how you explain the emotions n the scene