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"I don't think we should see each other anymore."2
Her smile quickly faded.3
"Wait...What?!" As her heart sank, anger arose and the combination of the two extreme emotions crashed like two immense tidal waves and she barely escaped a monsoon by shielding one single tear.4
"Please don't cry. Here, let's go into this room and talk."5
He led her into the nearest room which happened to be a biology room. The room was pitch black and it was quite obvious that the room was not being used that year. A thin layer of dust blanketed the chairs and desks.6
"I'm so sorry," she whispered while looking straight into his eyes. He nervously looked away.7
"Why are you sorry? I'm the one ending this," he said in an apathetically normal voice. He walked back and forth in a calm yet frantic manner.8
"But it's something I did. It's my fault," she sighed miserably. Tears suddenly poured down her already pink cheeks. He remembered how beautiful she was when she cried. "Oh..." she gasped again and put her hand to her mouth,"I'm sorry."9
He stopped walking and looked down at his shoes. "Can I go? Will you be all right?"10
"Yes," she said involuntarily.11
He was nearly out the door, when she said, "Wait!"12
Gathering up the remnants of her dignity and shoving them in the face of rejection, she ran up to him. "Please don't go!"13
She wrapped her arms around his neck and pressed herself against him. In a fleeting moment, she kissed him. Her mind flourished and her heart began to beat harder than it ever had before. 14
"I love you" she whispered.15
His eyes slightly widened and he grabbed her arms,"No, you don't! You do not love me."16
"But I do...I never had the courage to say it until now. Please don't let this end."17
Author notes
Just Part I.
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love this...... yeah i was thinking..... hmmmmm my brother wouldnt break out with someone like this, but i kinda knew it was based on it, great write!
-M -
this is a thrilling first part!! lol...glad I read the second part, but I still want to know why he is ending it!! You have to bring out a third one as well!!
*Blue is on tenterhooks or anticipation, waiting for the next part*
Blue
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I wants to read more :-P
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OH NO! This is not how the break up with me and Pierre went down at all! LOL This was BASED on it...But it was mostly a daydream.
!~YS4e~!
Scarlett -
cant wait for part 2 to come out you never told me exactly what did happen but i hope this wasn't it you capture the emotions to the point that i can see this happening as you normally do with your words great job
keep up the great writes
Gem -
oh my gosh...i got to know the rest! its so good. that girl , maybe even you, is really brave. the story is so..exciting,yet it stops, ends. you'd probably be a good writer for a series on t.v. or something
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sweet nice good, i like it a lot i can't wait to read the rest of it...it is true or no?
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