To Be Able To Tick


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If I could move the clock back,
What would be the result?
Would the numbers simply change,
Or would the sun chase them?2

But what if I could move it forward?
Would it be easier to do so?
When the hands are twisted too early,
Is the result a dangerous one?3

To take a finger and move it forward,
To use a thumb and make it tick -
If only the time wouldn't stay plastered,
If only the clock wouldn't stick.4

Oh, to be able to tick!5

~*~6


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  • Gwidlet
    January 5
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    Interesting. I don't like it, not my type of writing in the slightest, but interesting. You have potential, kid.


  • ChristieLove
    August 24, 2009

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    this was definetely different. I mean, I have seen a few writes about time, but none really about actually physically changing the time, some about turning it back, but not with their finger. It was very well done, and a good change of pace to read