My heart... My heart pounds with the steady power of a thousand enraged creatures and I tremble.1
Where did you go? You and I used to be so close. There's no father that could love his daughter more than you loved me. But what happened? You hurt me, driving your fury to my very core, leaving me bloody and desperate.2
All because it didn't work about between you and my mother? It doesn't make sense. You screamed at me, twisting and distorting everything I knew as a truth. My trust grew to fear; I could no longer understand. Your spiteful lies drove into my brain. I remember what happened before the lobotomy.
Author notes
A quite personal tid-bit of what happened to me thirteen months ago. I hope you enjoy it. Excellent contest idea.
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Comments
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Wow! This is some strong stuff. Very raw and painful; aptly named. I'm assuming this is about the change a person goes through when divorce occurs. It's so hard on the bystanders. Very well thought out and well penned.
~Mab
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Wait...your daughter wanted to date your mother?
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Absolutely no.
This about how I lost my father during the divorce...
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