Demons and Angels [Chapter 3]

Nature, Destiny and Fate, were different things. Destiny, would decide what will happen in your life. Fate, decides where your life leads you. And also consequences of actions. But Nature... Nature, and Destiny & Fate werent the best of friends. Unlike Death, Destiny, Fate, Hope, and others, Nature was actually... Nature. It was not a person, more like, a being. It would toy with Destiny & Fate's stories, and add little twists here and there. This would of course annoy Destiny & Fate, alot. As for that being bad, sometimes the Gods like to destroy peoples lives and watch them suffer! This would be fine, the only problem is that Destiny & Fate spend hours writing it all out. And when someone comes along and sits on your sandcastle, its not very nice. I'm not saying Destiny & Fate dont like to play their own games with peoples lives. 1

Death of course has to watch them mentally destroy mortals lives... he had to watch them, for safety reasons. So he says.2

"You lied."3

"No. You lied."4

"Yes. You lied."5

WHAT??6

"She lied."7

"She lied."8

... WHAT?9

"She lied."10

"She li-"11

YES. I GOT THAT. WHAT DID YOU LIE ABOUT.12

"I dont know." Destiny stared into space.13

"Me neither." Fate also stared into space, looking straight through Death.14

They both stared. They both looked like mindless zombies.15

WHAT ARE YOU STARING AT?16

"I dont know."17

"Me neither."18

WHY DO YOU KEEP REPEATING YOURSELF?19

"I dont know."20

"Me nei-"21

STOP IT. 22

"Ok."23

"Ok."24

I AM GOING TO SEE SATAN.25

"Ok."26

"O-" The door slammed shut. "-kay."27

HELLO.28

"Oh, you." Darrian rolled his eyes underneath his mask, and returned to walking down the corridor. 29

TELL ME, DARRIAN. HAVE YOU NOTICED ANYTHING STRANGE ABOUT DESTINY AND FATE?30

"No. I... dont think so. Why do you ask?" Darrian asked, looking over his shoulder.31

NO REASON.32

"I warn you. Satans in some sort of mood." Darrian turned a corner, Death followed like he was a newbie to this long maze like hall. Although Death knew exactly where he was, and where he was going. "A very confusing mood."33

EXPLAIN.34

"Imogens been weird. He's all..." Darrian threw his hands in the air, "crazy. I think its a mental problem or something."35

I DONT UNDERSTAND.36

"You wouldnt." 37

DEFINE.38

"Nothing. He's through here."39

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  • x Loveless x
    September 12, 2005
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    Its kind of going nowhere. Lolz. I have no idea what I'm doing. XD

    Diva ~

  • Already Gone
    September 12, 2005
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    very good chapter. this story is getting really good. i can't wait to read more. keep writing!

    <3 always,
    megan