Untitled Chapter 1

"Is that Claire Billington?"  I asked Crystal my best friend of four years.  "I don't know.  It looks like she's lost a lot of weight.  Which isn't good for her."  1

Claire Billington was the single, most popular girl in school.  Whether she was in class or at the mall, Claire was constantly surrounded by males. How did she get so lucky?  The answer to that was that she was rich and beautiful. She had this natural beauty about her.  With her long, shiny, shoulder lenght brown hair, blue eyes, and the face of an angel males found it hard to resist her. And to add on top of that her father owned the Fashion line Dash-Heart, the current fashion style of the year.2

Author notes

Hey I'm a major Christian.  If you wish to give me ideas to place in this novel go ahead feel free.  but remember:  this is a christian book so it must be kept clean.

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  • agalford7053
    October 12, 2005
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    hey thank your for stopping bye
    and the reason i didn't add you was because i didn't know your sn.. duh!!! lol
    thanks


  • DirtyWhite
    September 28, 2005
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    Hey, Ashes.
    Stoppin by and sayin whats up.
    //BTW..
    and the face of an angelm males found it hard to resist her
    "Angelm males" should be "Angel. Males" I think, or something like that

    And a lil comment
    I joined AP..

    I am your friend (I think )
    So why am I not added to your front page notes with AP family and friends, meanie?

    Anyways

    Loves ya Ashes
    C yas

  • Blushfulmoon
    September 14, 2005
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    excellent~

    I like what I have read here so far....would love to see a little bit more on this story........Have you thought of a title yet...I just for starting out would think of title it Claire's Heart
    Hope to read more of this and nice to meet you I don't come to Storywrite much and hopefully you will come to Allpoetry and check out my poems..
    Hugs
    Susan~~~