Divorce

Yeh, and what would my (our) life be like, now, today, if I hadn't agreed to the divorce? Would we be together and miserable, would we still be in that second floor walkup? 1

Or would I be here in my duplex, watching videos from Blockbuster?2

I'm thinking you're happy as me we're divorced, or as depressed as I sometimes get, now.

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  • ktunes
    August 21, 2009
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    Desperate

    The past is past. Keep writing. It'sll get better..

    beginning: 2, language: 2, plot: 2, ending: 2, dialog: 2, characters: 2.


  • SweeneyTodd-girl
    August 11, 2009

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    This was sad... I'm only 13, so I can't really relate to it, but I felt the emotion through the story. A great piece of writing. Thanks for entering!

    • ursabear
      August 15, 2009
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      Thanks for your comment on my entry for your contest. I hope you will visit my page and read my other stories. I would like others' feelings about them.
      Ursabear