Disclamer- all Characters in this story belong to J.K. Rowling, and are not being used for profit. Thank you!1
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"Uh Professor?" said Harry as he watched Hermione and Ron walk out of the classroom door to wait in the hall for him. He was suppose to ask Snape for a cure for shrinking potions, but he still didn't know why he had to ask him. 3
"What is it Potter, cant you see I'm busy!" Snape said maliciously starring at Harry over the top of his desk, with his hands folded beneath his chin.4
He looked nothing of the sort thought Harry but decided he had lost enough house points for Gryffindor and kept his mouth shut on that part.5
"Umm Professor Neville accidentally swallowed a shrinking potion and I was sent to ask you for a cure." Harry stated in a brave voice-which was pretty good under the circumstances considering Snape was cursing him with his eyes.-6
"A shrinking cure you say? ha ha the boy could stand to loose a few pounds, but here you go Potter." he said sliding open a desk space and pulling out a small bottle filled with a pinkish liquid. "Now get out of my site, I only want to see you when your in my class, and not even then!"7
Harry hurriedly walked out of the classroom and almost ran into the back of Ron. "Whoa sorry mate."8
"No problem, get what you needed Harry?" Ron asked starring at the pink bottle.9
"Yep lets go" Harry said and started to walk toward the door that led to the main hall of Hogwarts. He noticed that Hermione didn't follow though and turned back to ask if there was a problem.10
"I just forgot that I had a question on my potions essay. Ill meet you in the Great Hall for lunch." Hermione stated and turned back to go into Snapes classroom. As Harry and Ron disappeared up the dungeons stairs.11
As Hermione entered the classroom she noticed that Severus was gone, she only got to call him that when they were alone together, he pretended to be mean to her when she was in class, but was properly apologetic when they were alone she thought with a small smile. Noticing a light through his office door Hermione walked quietly to the door and pushed it open so she could see inside.12
"Yes? What is it, I'm extremely busy at the moment......" Then looking up from the paper he was writing on, he looked up to see who was at his door. Smiling when he saw who it was he pushed his paper away from his hand and got up to go around the desk.13
Hermione met him halfway across the floor and threw her arms around his neck. "I missed not seeing you today Severus, Being as it was a Saturday and I didn't have class." she pouted 14
Severus seeing the pout hurriedly put his lips on hers to wipe it away. They stood there for a few minutes and just let there mouths meet. He loved her but even in the wizarding world she was a minor and he couldn't have her yet, god when he thought about it she was only 16 but he couldn't let her go she was his and always would be. 15
Hermione broke the kiss and slid out of his arms grabbing his hand she led him back to the chair he had earlier vacated and sat him down then crawled into his lap. She sat there comfortable in the silence just running her fingers in his hair while he stroked her back. She was just leaning forward to kiss his cheek lightly when she heard a noise in the outer office. Jumping off his lap she went around the desk and sat in the chair opposite him, Severus not hearing the noise didn't know what to think.16
"Yell at me" she whispered "Hurry, there's someone out there."17
Catching on rather quick Snape raised to his feet and started yelling. "GRANGER YOU WILL FIND OUT YOUR TEST RESULTS ALONG WITH EVERY ONE ELSE DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR?" He bellowed18
"Ye.,Yes Professor." she stuttered faking a cry and giving him a loving smile since her back was to the door.19
"AND ANOTHER THING.." He stopped suddenly and looked at the door "Yes Malfoy what is it?" He said short temporally he didn't get that much time with Hermione when they saw each other and he had wanted to put this time to better uses.20
"Sorry for interrupting Professor but Professors Flitwick and Hagrid would like a word with you." "I was told not to come back without you."21
Damn he thought looking at Hermione he didn't even get to be with her that long today but he had to keep up appearances. "Alright Draco let me finish with Granger here and then I'll come, wait in the hallway for me." he said to Malfoy. Waiting until he heard the outer door close then he went to where Hermione sat and pulled her up and out of her chair and into his arms. "Love" he whispered "Meet me on the top of the Astronomy Tower at midnight tomorrow okay?" he said as he kissed her softly on her youthful lips. 22
She hugged him a little tighter and longer "Alright I'll meet you, I'll see you at midnight tomorrow." and turned and left the classroom.23
It was getting harder and harder to let her go but he kept telling himself that when she left Hogwarts he was going to be with her know matter what anyone thought even her low friends Weasly and Potter.24
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Hermione passed Draco on her way out and was just passing when he called her a filthy mudblood, turning back quickly she pulled out her wand and muttered "Astillious" which caused Malfoy to stand in place and not be able to move or talk. Smiling at him she turned and walked up the dungeon stairs and into the main entrance. As she reached the top she looked at her watch and noticed that it was almost time for supper so she just went ahead to the main hall and sat at the Gryffindoor table. Waiting for Harry and Ron to sit with her she glanced at the staff table and saw that every one was there except Severus.26
"Oh man am I hungry!" said Ron rather loudly as he was coming up to the table. He took the seat beside Hermione and gave her a small smile as he sat down.27
Harry noticing that smile laughed to himself Ron had had a crush on Hermione for the past year now and he was wondering when they would hook up.28
Hermione also noticed his smile and felt uneasy she didn't want Ron asking her out and her having to tell him no. She loved Snape but she couldn't tell Ron that,now could she.29
As they were sitting there eating and talking about Quiddich Hermione quickly lost interest, because she never really understood the sport. Seeing something out of the corner of her eye she saw Severus walking to his place on the staff table. She couldn't help smiling and starring at him she loved him.30
Snape noticing Hermione's stare turned his head slightly to look at her, he couldn't help the answering smile in return it was hard to show hate where there was none.31
Neither of them noticed Malfoy watching them curiously from across the hall. Then with an Understanding look going across his face he smiled slightly and turned to talk to his friends he would have to investigate he thought follow the little mudblood around for a few weeks and dig up the dirt for some ready blackmail.......The End So Far32
Author notes
my ex lover is from a clan of munkey butts!
Hermione and Snape relationship
A contest entry
- Harry Potter and / or Charmed by xxRainbowDawnxx.
100 points, ended February 24, 2007, 21 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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GREAT
Considering how similar this story is to the one about Hermione and Professor Slatius, I am surprised how much I like it, but the more I read of your work the better I like it. It's true that there are some punctuation errors you should watch out for, but they don't affect the quality of the story.
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Oh! I absolutely love it! I have never read Snape/Hermione before and this was just incredible. I think you've got me hooked. Now I can't wait to go out about the internet and read more. I really hope you write another part--I really want to know what happens. I did notice a few misspelling and typos though.
cant you see I'm busy!--"can't"
Umm Professor Neville accidentally--"Professor, Neville"
Uh Professor?--"Uh, Professor?"
Whoa sorry mate.--"Whoa, sorry mate."
Yep lets go--"Yep, let's go."
Ye.,Yes Professor.--"Ye...Yes, Professor."
that,now could she--"that, now could she."
at the Gryffindoor table--"Gryffindor"
site-"sight"
I don't care about misspelling, really, but I didn't know if you wanted to know or not. Really great write. You've got me addicted. Thank you for entering my contest, good luck, and Rock on. -
This is pretty good, if you want I can give you a couple of sited with snape/hermione fics some of them are really good. All in all it's a great job. Also, you could add frashbacks of how they came into their current relationship, and you spelled "sight" wrong in the 4th paragraph.
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very good......good luck in the contest -
you have me hooked! it's really late and i am reading it and i love it! i'm going to read all of the chapters now! omg i love this!
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lol thanks and you know i've never read a Draco/Ginny one. I'll have to see about that lol Thanks for the comment ~Lady Eclipse
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ive never read Hermione/Snape fics.
i like the Draco/Ginny fics,
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"Hermione stated and turned back to go into Snapes classroom. As Harry and Ron disappeared up the dungeons stairs." instead of two sentences this could stand to be a comma and small 'a' in as
"Catching on rather quick Snape raised to his feet and started yelling." 'quick' should be 'quickly' and 'raised' should be 'rose'
"Hagrid would like a word with you." "I was told not to come back without you." Should be those " between the sentences
"wait in the hallway for me." he said to Malfoy." the first period should be a comma
"I'll see you at midnight tomorrow." and turned and left the classroom." first period should be a comma
"even her low friends Weasly and Potter." 'low' would be better off as 'lowly'
"Harry noticing that smile laughed to himself" would sound better as 'Harry noticed that smile and laughed to himself.' and then the next part be a new sentence
"Hermione also noticed his smile and felt uneasy she didn't want Ron asking her out" would sound better as two sentences, meaning a period after 'uneasy' and a capital s in 'she'
"Severus walking to his place on the staff table." 'on' would sound better as 'at'
"turned to talk to his friends he would have to investigate" period after 'friends' and capital h of 'he'
"he thought follow the little mudblood" comma after 'thought'
fyi: to stare at someone and want it in the -ing form it is spelled 'staring'
I like this, forbidden love and whatnot. Always fascinating to read about what could happen if Snape had a bit of better feelings towards someone, epsecially if it's someone who he so blatantly dislikes. -
wow! this story is really good so far..besides the gagging that was going on when anyone kises snape...I'm sorry but to me that is simply disgusting! intesting and enjoying to read yes but very gross!
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why did you stop?!?!?
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its really really good...i wanna know more -
Great
As you well know I really love this in take. I have seen alot of odd comantions but this is the top of the list. Well done and Good Luck in the contest!!!!!! -
Thankyou it's definatly interesting to write about lol. Thanks for the comment ~Lady Eclipse
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this is definitely an interesting turn....Wow I would have never thought Snape and Hermione...wow. I like it!
Sara -
i really like this keep writting ^_^
avec amour *~Krymsin Kyss~* -
this is neat koolyful kep writing ur really good
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oOo well done, well done!! I must say, you definetly got me hooked. I, too, enjoy Harry Potter. I applaud you on creating a relationship such as this. Brilliant job and I hope to read more of this story. Good luck in the contest.
♥ Nicole
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OMG, I'm a huge Harry Potter fan, and I absolutely loved this piece. I love Snape, even though be becomes an A-hole in the later books instead of just being annoying. This was an excellent story I'm off to the next chapter.
Irilis -
Nice. A few grammatic errors, but it's no big problem. I like Snape and Hermione together. I've read a few varied character combinations, but this one's pretty nice.
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This is so awesome, I think it's sweet
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But let me add something here. Finish the fic first, then go over misspells and typos. I want to read the meat of the story more than you know. You've got me hooked.
Maab -
I'm loving the story. The beginning struggles a bit and you must go over the whole thing for misspells and typos (they're distracting) but that's not what I'm judging by. I'm interested in cleverness of plot and I find this to be very clever. I've read the parts up through five so far, and I'm anxiously awaiting part 6. You are a great writer. I do hope you continue to post fanfics on this site.
Maab -
Wow! that is an excellent idea for a story, i never would have thought of it.
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Wheeeey, write more. Itīs good.
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I write loads of it. Trust me.
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lol no you dont see many pairings of hermione and snape but ill tell you this it is interesting to write, sometimes even i dont know whats gong to happen next its so unexpected these two lol glad you all enjoyed it and yes there will be many more
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I can't wait ti read the sequel!!
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whoa that was diffrent, never thought anyone wouldn've wrote about that. Good work ^_^
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this story made me laugh like crazy!!! hurry and make the next one please?i always wanted someone to make the harry potter story different!
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more more more please
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I don't really like SnapexHermoine pairings but I must say this was written extremely well and the end was very suspenceful! Good work!
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