She is waiting, she is wanting, she is wishing. She is waiting for death, for life. She is wanting friends to love, enemies to hate. She is wishing for everything, because she has already found nothing.1
She is lying, she is trying, she is buying. She is lying because only lies are acceptable. She is trying because that's all that she can do. she is buying time before the inevitable.2
She is floating, she is flying, she is falling. She is floating, defying gravity and time. She is flying, her arms held out as wings. She is falling, falling, until the end of time.3
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I LOVED THE SECOND STANZA!! Don't get me wrong, the whole poem was simply amamzing but the swecond stanza really had me hooked. I truly hope that more people comment on this for you because I certainly enjoyed reading it. Definalty deserve some applause for me.....
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