Love Bites

The girl walked quickly down the street.  Paranoid, she kept glancing behind her. Unfortunately, she didn't suspect the danger to come from above.1

Joe landed in front of her startling her into a frightened scream.  He quickly clasped a hand over her mouth and asked her quite politely not to do it again.  Then he explained to her that he was a vampire and that she wasn't going to die tonight if she'd cooperate.  He promised sincerely that as long as she didn't fight it wouldn't hurt.  It would even feel pleasant as he drained her sweet, sweet blood.2

She nodded, after all, what else could she do?  Vampires are about 300 times stronger than humans.  She didn't stand a chance.3

Slowly and gently he tilted her head to the side, baring the main artery in her neck.  He was fascinated by her quickened pulse and bent down to taste it.  His sharp canines pierced her skin and he thought 'sleep' so she did so.  As she dreamed peacefully he watched her memories flash by with each glorious drop that spilled down his throat.4

The girl's name was Nicoletta.  Her friends called her Nici (pronounced Nikki) and she was 17 years old.  She was ironically quite interested in vampires and the rest of the supernatural world.  She had even written about them a lot.5

He toyed with the idea of granting that wish.  She was really beautiful and he could already see that she had many attractive qualities about her.  Many of which would make her a very strong vampire.6

He raised his head from her neck and gazed at her peaceful face for a moment.  With the back of his hand he wiped a few spare drops of blood off his lips.  He had taken only about the amount of blood a hospital would take for a blood drive.  She'd have a slight headache but awake perfectly fine other than that.7

He held her gently and fantasized about having her for himself.  He knew it was selfish and that he should simply modify her memory and go on his way, but he just couldn't bring himself to leave her.8

Joe could see himself spending eternity with this girl and being... happy.  It seemed such an odd sensation for one like himself to feel, but he suddenly craved it with everything he had.  So he changed her.  An exchange of Nicoletta blood and it was almost done.9

He held her close to him while her heart slowly stuttered to a stop and her breathing halted.  He gazed down in wonderment as her eyes fluttered open as a vampire for the first time.10

Stroking her long, black hair he told her what he had done.  He gave her his life story and expressed his loneliness and his longing for her with such beautiful words that she fell in love with him.11

They walked hand in hand through the night to look for prey.  Together they feasted and then in a frenzy they made love for the first time on the street.  He taught her many things that first night and for many nights to come.12

United eternally, the two lovers have since started a new 'life' in a new town, surrounded by new prey.  They were blissfully happy together and existed so for ever after.13

Author notes

I wrote this story for English. Evil Joe and I are the best story subjects ever!!!

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  • March 9, 2006
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    Jayme is teh hawt.

    Good job.


  • The Broken One
    September 20, 2005
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    uh huh


  • September 13, 2005
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    Don't forget to add the mustard

    Ya gotta cook the seagulls for about three hours with all the feathers and giblets. The bowels already have stuffing in em so we don't need to worry 'bout that. And if the seagull explodes you put too much alka-seltzer in the mix...


  • The Broken One
    September 13, 2005
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    Oh yes it's completely true o.o;;;;


  • September 8, 2005
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    Eh?

    This is a true story by the way. When me and Nici were doin' it in the road we almost got hit by a car but I killed the car and me and Nici feasted on the driver. We now live in Jamaica and have our own TV show about cooking seagulls.

  • The Broken One
    September 8, 2005
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    See I have this thing where like... I never finish my stories when I develop the characters too much. Plus this was just an English assignment written at like 1 am So gimme a break


  • ayten
    September 8, 2005
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    It was kinda short but nice. I'd show more of the characters but this would make a great story if you'd like to 'fill' it up

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