You're a FAGGOT

Taylor awoke in a dark room, sitting in a large, uncomfortable chair. 1

The lights flicker on. Taylor's eyes widen as they fall on the chair he is sitting in. It is metal, corroded and rusted. Wires connect from the arms and back to the ceiling. He is suspended. 2

Taylor moves his arms.....3

Pain shoots up his limbs. Taylor opens his mouth to scream, but quickly closes it as he sees what caused the pain. Hooks. Five of them, in each arm. Large, brutal hooks, curving in and out of his skin, holding him to the chair. 4

" Taylor. " 5

Taylor's head snaps up, and he stares, eyes pointed straight ahead. He sees nothing.6

" Surprise, " Alex laughs. 7

Alex steps into view, his dark, italian features appearring strange and sinister in the light. He is tall and muscular, with long, ebony hair that frames his tanned, olive face. He grins darkly out from under his dark locks as he steps, closer and closer, to Taylor.8

" Alex? " Taylor asks.9

" Mhm. Me. Who else did you expect, after that talking to you gave me last week? "10

Taylor winces, " I didn't mean it Alex. You know that. I was just having a bad day. "11

" Enough of a bad day to suddenly turn on one of your friends, a friend you've known since grade school, for being GAY?! " Alex hisses. 12

" I didnt mean it Alex. "13

Alex walks closer, and sits down, right in front of the chair Taylor is suspended in. He looks up at Taylor expectantly. 14

" Hello friend, " He says softly. 15

And with that, he reaches into his coat pocket, and pulls out a small, electric, circular saw, the kind used by doctors,or morticians. Taylor's eyes widen.16

" What are you doing Alex? " 17

Alex presses a button on the saw, and it whirrs so life. 18

" What are you doing Alex?! " Taylor's voice rises.19

Alex grins, " You know Taylor, I opened my heart up to you last week, and all you did was laugh. I offered you everything youve always told me you wanted. I offered to give you my heart, and you laughed. " 20

" Alex..... " 21

Alex's head snapped up and he grit his teeth, " NO! " he shouted, " You don't get to say ANYTHING! "22

And he jumped up, lunging momentarily at Taylor with the saw. Taylor screamed.23

" Alex! What are you doing? "24

Alex jumped back, and laughed, then looked at Taylor and snarled. 25

" YOU....FUCKING.....LAUGHED!!! " 26

With that, Alex shoved the saw into his chest. The spinning metal blades dug into his skin, tearing into muscle and letting forth rivers of blood. 27

" I wasn't lying when I said I was going to give you my heart, Taylor! " He shouted, 28

Taylor screamed, " ALEX! NO! What ar you doing?! " 29

Taylor closed his eyes and tried to get rid of the image, the horrible image of Alex holding the circular saw to his chest, cutting...cutting...cutting....but he couldnt. Not with alex sitting there in front of him. 30

Alex laughed, " You cant get rid of it, can you? Never. Every time you close your eyes, ill be there. Ill never go away....BEST FRIENDS FOREVER, RIGHT TAYLOR?! "31

Taylor thrashed in his chair, stopping only when the pain in his arms became unbearable. He looked down at Alex.32

" Whhhhyyyyyyy?????? " he moaned, " Why Alex? Why? "33

Alex didnt answer. Instead he leaned forward, slumping over. The mini circular saw fell out of his hands and clattered on the floor, still spinning. Blood dripped from the hole in Alex's chest, and as his body fell forward, his warm, yet unbeating heart, fell out and onto the dirty, grey, concrete floor.34

The saw continued whirring. Taylor thrashed in his chair, pain shooting up his arms. The thick, heavy door sprang open. Police darted in.35

" Freeze! " One shouted.36

Taylor froze in his seat. 37

" Ohhhhhhhhhh Alllexxxxxx, " He moaned. 38

An hour later, Taylor was freed from his chair. Alex had been pronounced dead, and his body still lay on the concrete floor in front of Taylor, who sat directly below the chair. The holes from the hooks seeped blood. Taylor paid them no mind. He couldnt feel them anymore. Police officers surrounded Taylor, asking him questions, trying to figure out what had happened.39

" He was my best friend, " Taylor sobbed, " I never knew he was like this. I never knew he could do all this. "40

" What exactly did he do? " A female cop asked.41

All the other people in the room stared at her. There was a long silence in the room. 42

Finally someone spoke up, " He cut himself open, " he said stupidly.43

The forensics doctor on call laughed, " In simple terms, yes. But actually, he's the first person ive ever seen to come that close to cutting out his heart. He actually suceeded. "44

The cops all started talking about that for a while. They all ignored Taylor, who had began talking incoherently. Babbling, really. 45

" Fuck fuck fuck fuck...... " He whimpered, " Fucking faggot...fag....goddddd helpppp meee whyyyyy me? Why? Me? Godddd..... "46

" Is he gonna be okay? " Someone asked.47

" No, " Someone else answered, " Too much emotional damage. Physically he's fine, except for those hooks, but that'll heal. This, this phsycological damage, will not. "48

" FAGGOT!!!! " Taylor suddenly screamed. 49

Everyone looked at him. 50

" Im soooo sorryyyyy, " He sobbed. 51

" Anyone know why he did it? " 52

" Nah. Not a clue. "53

" Maybe the kid knows? "54

" I don't know...but it wouldnt hurt to ask. "55

" Hey, " And a fat, balding male officer tapped Taylor on the shoulder, " Hey kid, " He asked, " Why did he do it? " 56

Taylor looked up at the cop increduously, as if he couldnt believe what he was hearing, " He did it because he was a faggot. "57

The cops tittered nervously.58

" What? " Someone asked.59

" he did it, " Taylor repeated, " because he was a fucking faggot. A goddamn fag. A FUCKING FAGGOT! "60

And then he turned abruptly to face Alex's limp, motionless body, " YOU!!!! " He screamed, pointing a fingure accusingly, " YOURE A FUCKING FAGGOT!!! "

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Its kind of weird. I wrote it and let people read it and now everyone's looking at me funny.

Honestly. What do you think?

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  • Luuke
    August 31
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    That was fucking amazing.

  • i think this is like the coolest story ever!, make another one, i think its awesome!


  • DoveFly
    August 1

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    This is beautiful in that strange sort of way. I really do like it. I was confused though-- I knew Taylor was suspended in the air-- with hooks- but I didn't understand how he was in a chair AND in the air.
    Good job. (And please pay no mind to those funny looks. This is a wonderful story)

    • RobertFish
      August 3
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      the chair was hanging from the ceiling, with hooks holding him into the chair.


  • Kevan gold member
    July 31

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    Well, I can see why people are looking at you funny. That's for sure. But it was well-written. It did draw me in, and kept me reading the whole way through. Good job.

    Kevan.

  • mithu54
    July 31
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    nice stor


  • GypsyBorn
    July 29

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    this is totally from the movie the horsmen...i just saw it like a few days. really good movie and you're story is pretty good as well.

    • RobertFish
      July 31
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      yeah

      i havent seen the movie. a friend saw it and described it to me and i liked this scene, so i kind of...furthered on it. I turned it into a love story.

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