The wings of an angel float past my window 1
Gliding with ease across the sky 2
One small movement sends it soaring far away from here3
Why can't it be me4
The bird stops now and perches high in a tree 5
Staring down6
down 7
down at me 8
Me looking up 9
and wishing with everything to be the bird10
Suddenly the bird is gone 11
There goes my angel
A contest entry
- POETRY SYMPHONY ROUND 1 by DemApples.
120 points, ended August 16, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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i like watching birds too wouldn't it be awesome just to fly away free from all responsibility and never have to worry about everything that human nature can make go wrong?
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I'm glad you got the concept of my poem, and yes, that would be wonderful.
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Nice flow. I can relate to the character, wanting to be free. This was pretty good poetry, keep up the good work.
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i thought it was extremely cute.
i also could compare this peom to me
thank you for posting thisbeginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, characters: 5.
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Thank you!
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wow, very good. reminds me of my mom because whenever she sees a feather, it reminds her of angles. very well done!
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Thank you.
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