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The wet earth seeps through my trousers,2
As I lean against the wall heavily,3
My eyes rolling, my senses in heaven,4
As I take the sweet sweet weed in.5
I feel a new life run through my body,6
As I finally feel happy and relaxed again.7
I can't believe this is college,8
I can't believe how good this feels.9
I take in another drag as I let my eyes roll happily,10
As I feel so brilliant inside.11
I feel like I can take the rest of the day.12
I can't believe it's been so good to start a totally new life,13
I can't believe it's so good to get to the _real_ life.14
But why does this seem so fake and painted?15
Why does this feel like a dream?16
It feels just like being with my family,17
As I sit in that art room.18
But for now it's only me and Bell sitting outside of it all,19
Just chilling and relaxing before we have to listen again,20
Before we have to be sociable again,21
Before having to go back in.22
I love it all, the college, the coarse, the people.23
I love the freedom to smoke the dope,24
To sit there and just chill out,25
Have that break to wake yourself up,26
Have that final drag to pass the day,27
But loving every minute of it.28
I love it all and I want it to keep going,29
To really keep living this dream.30
I don't want to screw this up31
Because at the moment I feel just like a Queen,32
Sitting here enjoying it all.33
Sitting here being in it all!34
Author notes
This is just literally how I feel like I really fit in at college and it being quite weird just doing weed at break and dinner time in the forest and feeling such a part of everythin... I know some people won't agree with this poem it's just kinda the way I was feeling...
What did you think? Please comment!
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great
Wow this is a really great piece. I like the imagery and the overall feel of it. Only one tiny little pet peeve. YOu put this under story and it seems more like a poem to me. Still great job -
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tar. i dnno y i put it under a story-think it was gnna be then i changed my mind... i don't like it much thgh=just can't think how to deleate it, thanx thgh x
Luv Lou
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lol nah I'm doing good in college-it's art and design and it's all goin awesome... Socialising is kool but I like to just take some time out 2 totally chill out every so oftern as well which is kool...
Luv Lou
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I was wanting to see more on what felt fake and painted: I liked the line 'like being with my family' have to socialize, like you don't want to, it puts you into roles you don't fit well? what? If you keep burning three times a day you will do shitty in college: guarantteed: I think:
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Tar-yeh I think if you're a former pot head it's easier to get my poem...kinda confusing but I hope you know what I mean. Merci for the lovley comment x
Thanx tons x
Luv Lou
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Tar hunnie-yeh it's kool to feel like you fit x
U've already given me the weed lecture anyway ;0)
Thanx hunnie 4 the luvley comment x
Luv Lou
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Amazing imagery. A former pot head myself I really know where this is coming from. Great write and very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing
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Like the poem hun, nice that you feel like you fit in
And like the kitten said ill skip the weed lecture 
great write
HNB
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Awww that's so sweeT. I kinda feel stupid for being scared on my first day now-but everyone seems to fit in there-like everyone! And I'm sure it'll be the same for you. lol-not smoked weed much for ages...been weird but felt right to do it again-tryin not 2 start heavy smoking again though-it's really hard to resist though. But oh well I'll be fine :0)!!! Glad you liked it cause college is really ace!trust me!
Luv Lou
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This is a great poem....and i shall skip the lecture about the weed but you know what i think
Amazing write hun. I dont feel so scared about tomorrow now 
One love,
Kitty xxx
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