(Poem)- Sunsparkle Eyes

You hold dearest,
The heart in me.
Your kiss is,
So sweet and free.
My love is yours,
As yours is mine.
Hold me tight,
Intertwine.
Your sunsparkle eyes,
Butterflies,
In my stomach fluttering,
Can't stop this shuddering.
Heart beating fast,
Letting this last.
Never-ending,
I'm all too depending,
On your heart,
Your work of art.
Work your skills,
Giving me chills.
Slow kiss,
Fast dance.
Got me hypnotized,
A trance.
Heart leaping,
Love creeping,
Upward toward the sun,
Let it run and run.
Tick-tock-tick,
Together we click.
Your hands on my hips,
My lips to your lips.
Forever be,
Just you and me.

Author notes

The way love can feel.

This poem doesn't have the best rhythm and flow, but it does have some rhyme. I didn't set it to be specific. It has some a-b-a-b and some a-a-b-b format.

I love you, Ben! ♥

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  • Hybrid Dragon
    July 31

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    I love you too ♥

    Okay, I don't read poems often, but the flow of this and the wording are good. I know, sounds a little bias, but yeah, I really liked this


    • iDifferent-
      July 31
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      Thanks^^

      I didn't think the flow was the best at points, but I guess that since you like it, it must be better than I thought. Thanks for the 's. I really appreciate it.

      Thank you,
      Suteki Banshou

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