Dancing barefoot: lovin' Elna

Dancing at the lake: “lovin’ Elna”              1

          As he lay on the beach, totally relaxed after a hearty lunch Zak heard music and, raising up to discover the source; saw two couples dancing in the picnic area. He noticed that one of the boys had driven his car close and was playing the radio. Zak asked Elna if she wanted to dance, and she raised up to look, then said she would like that, so they went to join the others. It was a shaded area and the red clay had been walked on until it was as smooth as a hardwood floor, making it a good dance floor for bare feet. Elna came into his arms and they began to sway to the rhythm of the music, only moving their feet occasionally. Pulling her close, he could feel all her sexy charms as she yielded her body to him. As the poignant strains of Benny Goodman’s `Let Me Call You Sweetheart` faded away, `Red Roses for a Blue Lady` came in, almost blending into one melody. The mood was sad but sweet, causing the heart strings to throb with love as they held each other close, feeling the heat between their bodies increase as their young sexual appetites were whetted by the close contact as well as the mood. Zak’s genitals were confined in a lightweight jock strap built into his trunks, and usually formed a small comfortable mound at the juncture of his thighs. However, nothing with Elna was ordinary, and the mound had grown a bit so that she could feel it probing her belly and pubic mound and she began swaying her body from side to side, rubbing it. Before long, it became so uncomfortable he reached down between their bodies and, stretching the waistband of his trunks, pulled his erect dick straight up. That relieved the cramping, but his trunks wouldn’t completely hide it, leaving the head exposed above the waistband. Pulling Elna’s body close to hide it, he felt it press into her from her pubic mound to above her belly button. Her movement against it let him know that she felt it also and she whispered in his ear, “Ummmm feels good”. Taking a quick look around, Zak saw that the other couples were paying no attention to them, since they were otherwise occupied, doing their own things. Moving both hands down her back in a long caress, he was soon holding her ass cheeks, one in each hand. Squeezing them, he pulled her pubic mound hard against his erect and throbbing penis and, hearing her catch her breath, knew he had found another of her erotic zones, her ass. He also learned that her ass was an erotic zone for him as well, felt almost as good as her breasts. Experimenting, he pressed a finger between her ass cheeks and felt the fabric of her suit give, allowing the finger to spread the cheeks and slide between them. Hearing her low moan, he moved his finger a little, pressing inward at the same time and, as his finger touched her asshole she gasped, asking, “What are you doing to me----is anyone looking”? Although they had moved slowly, and not very much, Zak noticed that they were out of sight from the others because of the trees, and told her that no one could see them. Slipping his hand under the leg band of her suit, he soon had her naked ass in his hand, and quickly slipped a finger into the slit between her cheeks. When his finger touched the little, tight hole she grunted and pushed her ass back to meet it. Zak asked her if it felt good and Elna answered, “Oh yes---I can feel it all the way to my pussy”. As he pushed harder, he felt the hole open a little and his finger slipped inside, causing her to shudder and begin climaxing, biting his shoulder to keep from screaming with pleasure. She sagged in his arms and he held her close, supporting her weight till she revived. Looking lovingly into his eyes, she asked how he learned all these incredible things. Telling her that he didn’t know what he was doing, but by following his instincts it all seemed natural to him, and that he was just as surprised as she with the outcome. Elna moved her hand between their bodies and caressed the part of his penis that was uncovered, and naked. The feeling was so intense, her naked hand on his naked dick; he could no longer contain himself and came with spurt after spurt of semen, which shot up between their bodies, landing on his chest and her breasts. Elna laughed delightedly. After he recovered somewhat, Zak looked around to see if they had been seen by anyone else, then pulled back enough to stuff his half hard penis back into his trunks as Elna playfully smeared the semen around on his chest. Putting her sticky fingers to her nose, she sniffed, then took a deep breath. “Doesn’t have any smell”, she said, then asked, “How does it taste”? Looking at her in surprise, he answered that he didn’t know, it never occurred to him to taste it. Dipping her finger back in the come, she put it up to his mouth, saying, “You first”, with a mischievous smile. Zak hesitated, turned off at the idea of tasting his, or anyone’s, semen. On second thought, if it would please Elna, he would taste anything, so he accepted her finger into his mouth and sucked it clean. Removing her finger, she looked at him with a question in her eyes. Looking surprised, he told her it had hardly any taste, maybe a bit salty. Rubbing her finger in another glob, she put it to her mouth and tasted gingerly, then popped it into her mouth and sucked it, telling him it tasted good. Zak was amazed at how far she had come in accepting sexual things, also at how far he had pushed, as well as how much they had learned about such things. He thanked Elna for making him feel so good, then he thanked God for giving her to him.2

Noticing the sun getting low in the western sky, he suggested they get ready to leave. Not wanting to be late and have to fuss with her mother, Elna agreed. Glancing at her stained suit top, Zak told her to come into the water with him, and wash off, and they ran into the lake, hand in hand. Going out chest deep, they splashed around until they felt a little cleaner, then left the water and toweled off. Most of the other couples were getting ready to leave also, so they told them they had a good time and must do it again soon. Since her suit was wet, Elna decided to ride to town wearing it, instead of putting her clothes on over it, and Zak agreed with her, saying he would do likewise, so she arranged to stop by Ruth’s house to change before going home. Zak knew they would cause quite a stir among the older generation as they rode through town nearly naked, well, why not, the town folk needed something to gossip about. Their suits dried out on the ride to town and Zak dropped Elna off at Ruth’s, where she said that she would walk home. Telling her so long till next time, he stopped by Mrs. Hubbard’s to change clothes, and then went by Café Royal to get a burger before leaving for Memphis. It had been a full day, a happy day, and one that would supply memories to last for his lifetime. 3

Of course, Zak didn’t realize the full impact of all that he was learning by exploration and experimentation. Actually, he was developing a skill that most men never acquire, the skill to please a woman completely, with skillful, sensitive, adoring foreplay, and the patience to delay his own pleasure until he was sure that she was completely satisfied. That is one of the things about their young love that would weld them together in a union that would last through two wars, plus much more adversity, through good times as well as bad, all the days of their lives. Zak was such a sensitive young man, as well as being so much in love, that the desire to please the girl he loved took precedence over all else. I think he had his priorities in the proper order. What do you think? Zak rode home with feelings of love and contentment, as though he and Elna were already married. Life was good.4

                                                 ©…by jean ruff5

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  • dittysri
    December 11, 2003
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    My deepest thanks to the few story readers who commented on my small tale of erotica. Let noone think for a minute that this is a real life experience, though I can still hope fantasies come true. LOL, jean


  • wellnow1313
    December 7, 2003
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    woooooohooooooooo WOW!! What a H~O~T HOT story! Wow! That was great!! Wheeeeeeeeew damn that was HOT as hell! Got to love a man that will do ANYTHING (and that was EXTREME to taste your own) to please a woman! EXELLENT story write! Very well done! ......................Sheila


  • angelica
    December 2, 2003
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    My Jean,this really got the adrenalin going,enjoyed reading it though.It is a pity not enough time is taken for the partner to enjoy it these days.Never went dancing on the lake...unfortunately...sounds like fun.really enjoyed reading it Jean,will look forward to reading more.Love to you~Joan

  • arden
    December 2, 2003
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    damn,

    another impressive write from ye jean! och, i find that the ability to please ones partner so compleatly is a lost art. just too many want fast, and quick... all looking for thiere own grtification instead of the other. it isna any wonder then, why i hear so many lass and lad alike say that they no longer realy enjoy the act. pity as well, look how great 'tis.

    arden

  • Desire
    December 1, 2003
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    ~You are such a darn good story teller~ I lull people to sleep~ Keep on writing and inspiring the lower extremeties~ Loved this write~ Keep them cumming~I mean coming~ So look forward to more~ Big hugs and much love~Desire

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