Rain

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Rain:2

It’s raining, we are in bed, the rain is beating down on the roof. We are awake and it is just cool enough to have a sheet over us and cuddle up.3

I can fell your Brest rise and fall against me as you breath. Your breath is smooth and slow. You are so warm and soft beside me. 4

My hand now runs over your body, I fell goose bumps on your soft skin. I now bring my hand to your breasts, I squeeze them softly and rub them around and around, and down your stomach slowly. Your breath is getting heavier, and it gets my “attention”.5

Now I put my hand down to your warm  softness. You suck your breath in and hold it. I squeeze your softness , but not to hard, just enough to make you breath in again. Round and round up and down with my hand. I can fell warmth coming from your pussy, as you move to meet my hand. 6

You role over toward me and kiss me warm and deep, tongues together, lips glued together.7

You spread your legs more so I can get to you better, my finger goes in side your inter lips and move up and down your slit, and up to your clit. Which gets another deep breath form you. Slowly up and down inside your slit and dipping inside your love canal and back up to your clit. 8

Your hand goes down to my cock that is getting hard and you start rubbing up and down and squeezing it till it gets hard as stone, and throbbing .9

You shift your body under me as I raise up above you and get in between your legs. You reach down and guide my cock into your hot and wet pussy. 10

I slide it in slowly , a little at a time, but deeper each time. The smile on your face is so warm and loving I could just drive it in , but I don’t, just slowly, in and out. You move to meet my moves and kiss me again, deeply, hungrily, wanting.11

Now I’m all the way deep inside you, stretching the walls of your hot wet pussy, you squirm underneath me as I stroke you’re insides with my cock. We fuck each other slowly at first, then slowly increase the rhythm . 12

Your breath is getting deeper and deeper matching mine, as we get closer to the goal we both want. 13

Your pussy is squeezing my cock and begging for the juices therein , and also for the relief it is striving for.14

The rhythm quickens, breath deepens, hands squeeze, thrusts get faster and harder, a sound low in your throat starts to build up, and gets louder and louder, until I can make out what you are saying, “fuck me, fuck me hard.”15

That’s all I can take, I start pumping your pussy with all my mite, in , out, in ,out.16

You start a low moan that gets louder and louder till it is more of a muffled scream, as you grab my butt and help me thrust deep inside you. 17

Then the hot overwhelming waves of hot love juice shoots up in side you and you can’t hold off any more  and let go of an mind shattering orgasm that almost makes you pass out.18

We lay there coupled together for a long time, catching out breath. 19

I brush the hair from your eyes, and see the warmness in them smiling out at me.20

I kiss you softly, and slowly pull out of you.21

I love it when it rains.22

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  • VampireShadow
    December 4, 2006
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    awww...that was really cute. Very very hott and nicely detailed...but at the same time overwhelmingly sweet, it actually made me say "awww." Your last line complemented it very very well, a great endin to such a wonderful story.


  • Ember Rose
    October 3, 2005
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    Yet another very erotic and sensual story. Hmmmm...wondering if you are one of those writers of the books I have purchased on occasion from my local porn stores . Love this. Keep this up and I may have to find a way to share my bubble baths. rose

  • Beret55
    September 29, 2005
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    If you need any help in the shower.. mmmmmmmmmmm hehe
    Thank you for your warm comment.
    And yes a metal roof is soooooooooo good in the rain. The cool breeze with the rain is mmmmmmmmmmmm.
    Glad you liked it, and would be an honer to be in your favorites.


  • blueyezcryin
    September 29, 2005
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    Oh my, think I need my lover now but will have to settle for a cold shower. Maybe I just need to take things into my own hands with this write. It was just yummy. I love makinglove to the sound of rain beating on the roof, especially a metal roof. But I love it even more outside in the rain, just a soft, light rain. MMMMMM...it has been awhile since that has happened. Thanks for letting me relive those moments. I just love your work. I think I will be adding you to my favorites if you don't mind. Thanks for sharing this part of you.
    Your friend,
    Shona

  • Beret55
    September 8, 2005
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    Thank you very much. Your a doll

  • SexyAngel0418
    September 8, 2005
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    WOW.... This is awesome... It is very erotic.... Not raunchy at all... You did a great job on this story!! Very captivating...

    Beth

  • Beret55
    September 8, 2005
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    I hate carpet burns.. hehe
    Thanks for your comment.

  • Black Rose 1481
    September 7, 2005
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    aww this is sweet better than carpet burn sex, so beautiful its erotic
    Sh0rty

  • Beret55
    September 7, 2005
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    You ladies are so kind. I just write of things ive done and hope others like what i write.


  • September 7, 2005
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    Amazingly Beautiful

    Oh My Goodness... again my dear friend P.N. you have penned and amazing story full of passion and desires... Loved reading it, flames and fire all over this board... Lovely!! ~Elba~

  • Halocaust
    September 7, 2005
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    This is very beautiful. Though a few spelling errors, it was perfect.

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