Oh Edward.1
Thou's glittery skin.2
Blinds thee into hideous oblivion.
Author notes
Vampires
About ten words.
A contest entry
- Twenty-five words or less... by tallblondie.
600 points, ended July 29, 25 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Haha oh wow. I loved this
! Short and sweet, staright to the point. What a fantastic description to the much-loved Edward Cullen 
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I snorted when I read this.
It was funny! I loved how you incorperated old english into this piece. It makes it sound all the more...well, funny, honestly.
Great job and keep writing!
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I love the use of old english in this, it just gives it a bit of... flare. It is quite possible that one day no one will remember sparkling vampires.
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I often wonder what the next generation of 'vampires' in fiction will be... perhaps holographic retroreflective ones...
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Lmao, creative, Trippeth. XD
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lmfaoo thanks Trippeth
i posted this at like 3 AM last night xD
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xD Cute! But werewolves... they're just betteeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrr
xD. No, I love the vamps too, but mostly the wolves, much more depth in them I find . Anyway 
nice piece of work, good luck in the contest!
~Luck&Love~
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lool thanks dippy
i'm more fond of werewolves too, i agree about the depth!
and thanks for the comment
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