Stranded, her heels were broken again. Shattered, lost, struggled under this darkened night. Ah, such a scene of perfect horror. Her pale complexion and shining blond hair surely contradicts with such darkened nights, it looks like her Goddess nature would not fit in such a place of forever grieving and endless terror. 1
Her pink Dior nails are minuets of perfection. Her face was beautified with light blushes of blue eye shadows and mascaras - think of Venus - and she is the perfect human representation of it. She is the glowing sapphire in darkness, the light in les mysteres, the crimson rose in grasslands!2
But then, such angelic looking beings may not necessarily be so divine and lucky in reality. Let me tell you the tragic story of this Goddess - Monique. 3
Monique was traumatizing herself with her 10th shot of vodka - ah, that taste, that aroma! By definition, vodka is a 'party girl's' drink, and yet, vodka was her ultimate traumatize, her personal drug to amnesia - 4
but every time she drinks, flashbacks about her father's monstrous rape and herself as a constant victim always comes back. Always. 5
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It was 10 years ago, she was in this sunbeam paradise where tranquil beaches lie, and emerald waters gleam as if you are in the Garden of Eden. The houses in the neighbourhood might be regarded as small cottages compared with that of the Fifth Avenue, but the palm trees and maples are perfect minuets of nature. Ah, Connecticut! 7
She was an innocent 13 year old then, listening to the pop songs of Billy Idol and The Beatles with her sister Paulette. The crimson stripes of sun slowly begin to fade over her white house, as sparkling waves from the private swimming pool bide farewell to the sun. It seemed that everything was flawless. Incomparable. Perfect. 8
Her glimmering blond waves was her last remembrance of chastity and peace. It was the day before her so-called death, or destruction. The pretty rose was to be destroyed forever....9
....(this is for you to find out in part II)10
Author notes
help! I am currently writing twisted stories - AGAIN.
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I loved the introduction to this it was elegant and the words created images...
amazing
good luck and thanks for entering
flutta
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You are a tease aren't you? Now I'm supposed to wait for days or maybe weeks to find out what happened. And again another weeks until you decide to tell us if she makes it through or not! But I don't mind. It's nice to have something to look forward to in this life. And this promises to be good because it has so much potential.
And what's wrong with writing twisted stories? That's what I write most of the time. It's where I thrive!
Don't take too long to finish this one. I'm waiting.
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