Revenge of Sophia

The life of the angels is supposed to be a good one. Forever in paradise, living the high life and being able to do whatever you want. If you wanted to swim you could swim. If you wished to fly you could fly. The only time you couldn't do what you wanted, was if it posed a threat to the human race. This made all the angels happy, probably why they are so beautiful, as each angel has the most radient skin, most beautiful of eyes, no matter what the colour, and the most beautiful shiney hair ever seen in the world. Most angels were blonde with saphire blue eyes, some angels had jet black hair with beautiful brown eyes, others may have had brown hair with either colour eyes. However one of the angels was different, not only in appearence, but at the fact that she was not happy. She was miserable, for all the activities she wished to do focused upon the killing of her masters enemy, the slaughter of a human.1

Her misery continued throughout her period of trial, to whether she was truly an angel. They judged this on many different attributes, their personality, their love for their jobs, but most of all their looks and passion for what they want. This angel was one of the highest forms of angel, with six silver white wings. Her appearence was different to the other angels, she had long shiney silver hair and bright emerald green eyes. She had a burning desire to follow her master, and kill this blonde who had hurt him so badly, who had hurt her mother and of course, hurt herself. Her personality was very cold, yet she was still lively and bubbly when she wanted to be, but she held a pain deep within her, which she carried with her to be released at the correct moment. If the trial came out positive, she knew she would not be able to serve her master, yet she knew she was an angel. Full of power and passion. The day of the trial arrived, and she was told that she was an angel, but by appearence only. There was too much hate in her heart to be a true angel, and they sentenced her to an eternity on the planet gaia. She could only use her angelic powers when in danger, and her appearence was not to be seen by any normal human. This made her happy2

Her appearence on gaia was different to that of the angel up above. She still had her long silver hair and emerald green eyes, yet she was human in appearence. She wore a black T-shirt like top with black flared trousers, black laced boots, which were similar to walking boots and a long black cape coming down just past her knees. She carried with her a masamune blade, which looked very similar to the one her master carried, yet it had little power within it.She decided she would need a name. A one unique yet similar to the one of her master. She decided to go with Sophia. Yet this is what she would be known as on Gaia, she would be forever known as the not so true angel, and as she had her right arm replaced with a wing in her angel form, she decided upon another name. One which would relate her to her master not only by appearence, but by name also. She called herself the 1 winged angel. Names in hand she decided to start a journey. A journey to find her master. Another fallen angel rejected for the same reason as she. The most famous and talked about angel among the humans and creatures of gaia, the One Winged Angel, also known as the great general of the shinra army. Sephiroth.3

Author notes

Well. I decided to put Angels of the time on hold for a while, and I have started a new story based on my role play character, and we may even meet a couple more of them in this story. Tell me what you think of this. I would appreciate it

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  • okokokokok
    December 6, 2005
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    nice story.

    hahahahahahhahahahaha no wonder the one i commented earlyer was kinda confusing. hahha i am kkinda slow. well this makes more sence. there are several parts and i read a later one in the series. but hey nice story. i like it. i will continue over the days to read more of your seriies. i think you are a good short story writer. i need to take notes from you. i think it is good. awesome write.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 7, 2005
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    Wow, i that was a killer story, i liked it, i am a final fantasy fan myself not a strongly as most people but i like your character, how she is kind of an outcast in the angel cicrle, i can't wait to read the next one

  • 1-Winged-Angel
    September 7, 2005
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    awww Thankyou

  • Old Foe
    September 7, 2005
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    I will aplaud I promis I'm kind of low on points, and that's for your second part of the story too...

  • 1-Winged-Angel
    September 6, 2005
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    Thankyou. Hopefully I will be able to post the next part soon


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 6, 2005
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    WONDERFUL STORY;

    A wonderful start to a very interesting story. I am waiting anxiously to read more.

  • 1-Winged-Angel
    September 6, 2005
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    yeah we should . I'm glad you like it , and hopefully chapter 2 will be up soon


  • Lucian Valcor
    September 5, 2005
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    this was awesome, you do have a way with detail girl, and I like the fantasy theme, great work you know we should talk more

    Mortikie

  • 1-Winged-Angel
    September 5, 2005
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    I'll re read it tomorrow. When i read through it again i didnt notice any typos but it is 2 in the morning here. Thanks for reading and commenting I really appreciate it


  • Holly Anne Fairden
    September 5, 2005
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    Great!

    I like it! It's very interesting and detailed. However, I did notice some typos and you could also seperate those paragraphs into smaller paragraphs! I really liked it! Great job! I enjoyed it a lot!

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