Rithisak Falls

Excerpt- "Father, I will not and cannot leave with you. I am sorry but I am soon to be engaged. My place is now with my fiance." The King scoffed. "He is soon to be executed for daring to fall in loved with my daughter; with a princess." His eyes glistened strangely. "See I did what no other King has done before. I have made a bastard child of a commoner, a princess. You know that your mother said it was impossible. Yes, I am the first." He looked up at me, uncurling his fists. With hand outstretched he whispered, "Come with me, daughter.: Looking at him straight in the eye I backed up to the window. "I told you before, Father, I will not go. Go back to Spain. Your throne does not rest here in England." With that last remark I jumped into the dark moat below.

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