My name is Tallen and I’ve been an initiate in training to become a wizard for the Moon Magical Order. I have been training for the past 16 years ever since I was five. My initiation was tonight and I was nervous as to what happens. Some people said that you go through torture and others said that you open yourself to the wonders of the powerful magic of our order.1
No one, however, said what exactly happens and I gnawed at my fingernails worrying that I wouldn’t be able to pass. The initiation was the ritual that would unlock my magical potential. I hoped that I could succeed and join the ranks of my order. 2
I was informed to arrive at the main building a half an hour before midnight to get prepared and ready for the ceremony. I was given a white silk robe to wear and my long hair was braided in the traditional fashion. I was told to wear only the silk robe and nothing else. I raised my eyebrows at that, but obeyed.3
I walked out into the ceremonial circle and saw a robed figure in red, standing tall, the face shrouded by a hood also of the same color. The circle was surrounded by white robed hooded figures as well, four of them. Each representing the four directions of a compass.4
The figure to the north said “Tallen, you have come here to pass your initiation and become one of our order. Your magical potential will be unlocked this night and we four, the directors of the order have come to hear your words as to why you believe that you belong in the order.” He spread his arms to his sides and the other four directors mirrored his movements.5
I looked at each of them and said “All my life, I’ve wanted to become a member of the order because the order stands for reason, justice and compassion in a world that doesn’t readily accept it. But when the order wizards do their work, happiness and life are brought back into the world and the Darkness recedes into the hell that it came from. I’ve always wanted to bring compassion and life to people in need and that’s my reason to join the order.” I held my hands in my lap and knelt. “I await your decision, oh wise ones.”6
The directors stared at me and they stayed silent for several minutes. The one in the red robe stared at me as if looking right through me and before I could question it, the north director spoke: “We believe that your heart speaks true and your conscience is clear. However, there is the ceremony to unlock your potential and for that, we leave you.” The directors in white left and the only one that remained was the robed figure in red. The figure spoke in a clear female voice “Rise, my compassionate wizard”7
I rose to my feet, intrigued that a female would be overseeing my initiation ceremony. “Yes, my lady.”8
She removed her hood with long fingers and red nails. As the hood crept back, I saw that she had long flowing black hair with piercing gray-blue eyes. Her eyes held compassion and determination. I wondered about the last part, but she spoke before I could inquire “Tallen, son of Kylen, son of Mistral… my name is Xerena and you have come before me to commence the ceremony. This can be done one of two ways and it’s your choice.” 9
She rested a hand on mine and looked into my eyes. Her voice was soft as she said “Choose wisely.”10
“Your first choice is harsh, but rewarding and the other is soft, but an easy path and may not unlock your full potential. In my hands are the two options, the whip and the flower. Make your choice and she bowed her head.11
I mulled over the choice in my head and I knew that I wanted my full potential in order to bring that help to those in need. 12
“I’ll take the whip. I want to make sure that I can have my full potential to help people.”13
“Are you sure?” she asked, her lips curling into a smile that bordered on feral.14
I looked her in the eyes and said “Yes.”15
She nodded once and said “Remove your robe and kneel.”16
I did as she asked and knelt, resting my butt on my folded feet.17
She uncurled the whip and walked around me, letting the whip tickle my back. I fought not to shiver.18
“You are brave and yet foolish for taking such a hard task. While it may unlock your potential, there is a chance that you may be broken by the pain.” She said, coming close to whispering in my ear. She then took my hands and locked them into shackles that were chained to the floor beside me on either side.19
I turned my head to her and said “I’m ready to face my task.”20
She sighed, breathing in my scent. “Very well… prepare yourself, my compassionate wizard.”21
The first strike of the whip against my back made me twinge and gasp. Before I could ready myself, the second strike came down hard and I groaned at the pain. Every strike of the whip made me tighten and clench my body until all I felt was my back singing in pain. 22
Xerena stopped her whipping and admired her handiwork. She whispered in my ear “I have to say that I’m surprised that you lasted as long as you have. Most would have crumbled and wept, but yet you remain strong.”23
“To crumble is to show weakness against the Darkness.. I will not fail.” I said with surprising surety. A calm had placed itself over me and I felt something warm uncurling itself in me at the conviction of my words resounded through my soul.24
Xerena knelt before me and placed my head in her hands and brought my face to hers, our lips inches from each other. “Never in my life have I heard such conviction and strength resound throughout a single individual’s body and soul.” She whispered so softly I could barely make out what she was saying. 25
She took a breath and I inhaled at the same time, taking in her scent. She smelled of red spice and vanilla. She raised herself up to her feet and walked around to my back.26
“I told you that your initiation would be harsh, but rewarding and now you get to reap your rewards. I’m going to release your shackles and I want you to turn around to face me. There is one final piece to complete before we unlock the magic inside you.”27
She undid my bonds and I rubbed my wrists. Apparently, I had struggled against the whip and chafed my wrists against the hard steel. I turned and what I saw stunned me, frozen in place. 28
Xerena’s robe was pooled on the floor at her feet and she was nude. Her long straight black hair covered her breasts teasingly and she stood with her legs together. She looked luminous as the moon shone through the skylights above.29
“The last thing that’s required of the ritual is a passionate act to balance the pain that was caused. Only by this act can you survive the awakening.” She came forward and rested a hand across my cheek. She then leaned forward and whispered in my ear before kneeling at my feet. “For forgiveness.”30
She took my phallus in her hand and it rose to meet her. She then licked a line from my balls to the tip that sent me shivering in place. I rested my hand on her head and felt her silky hair through my fingers. She took me in her mouth and with each lick; the warm feeling built up almost burning me up as she leisurely explored me to her content.31
She looked up at me with my phallus in her mouth and the sight was nearly too much. I gently pushed her away from me and I lifted her up in my arms and put her on a table against the wall. Her lips curved in a slow smile and her eyes glinted with mischievousness as she opened her legs and I drew in her musky scent. 32
The scent drew me down and I devoured her nether lips with abandon and it wasn’t long before she grasped my short hair and moaned deliciously. It was music to my ears and I wanted her to do it again and again. Her hips clenched around my head and a flood of her essence ran into my mouth. I consumed it greedily and after I was done, she pushed me back and grasped my hips with her legs.33
She looked me in the eyes and I swore for a moment that her gray-blue eyes twinkled and glowed like the moon when she was full. “Take me with passion, Tallen and unlock your true potential.” She guided me to her and I thrust hard, going deep and making us both groan with ecstasy.34
She locked her legs around mine and with each thrust; I felt that warmth inside me combined with Xerena’s essence mix and the pieces connected and the gates that I felt all my life containing my magic shattered with the joining. I screamed out in pain and pleasure as I felt my skin feel as if it was boiling one second and then cold the next.35
Xerena held me to her and she said “Focus on me or else everything will have been in vain.” And then she kissed me. She kissed me with fierceness that I have never felt yet wanted all my life. She kissed me as I was the last air left on this earth and I couldn’t help but respond with my own passion for her and her generosity.36
I felt my skin go hot and start to glow and then her skin mirrored mine and soon our joining was not physical, but spiritual and I felt her essence deep in my core.37
“Let go and enjoy the wave.” She said, smiling.38
I let go and we both came, riding the power wave and the passion of this night. After what felt like hours, but was most likely minutes, I came back to myself collapsed on top of her. Everything in my body was hurting, but I felt power brimming just under my skin and I felt magic all around me. I looked at her eyes in wonder and she looked at my expression and her lips broke into a large grin.39
“I’ve been waiting for you for years. Welcome to the Order, Tallen.”40
Author notes
I was inspired to write this because I've always wanted to write a magical awakening involving sex. I hope you enjoy it! 
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Comments
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loved it:)
WOO!! GOOD JOB!!

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Wow, what a story,
The beginning is a good start it is at a fast pace and I feel it does draw you into the story. I liked the way you introduced Tallen but it would be nice to have more of a description on what he looked like. Your characters are very realistic.
Your plot is well rounded out and it kept my interest throughout the story. Throughout you kept it at a fast pace, it is easy to read and flowed beautiful. Your description of the surroundings of the story is good but as I've said it would have been nice if there was more description on your characters. The way your characters spoke sounded very realistic the ending was very rounded out you tied all the elements together well.

beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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You know a day will one day come when I won't stare at the screen like an obsessed idiot while reading your stories...however...that day won't be coming soon I assure you.
Have I ever told you that you have an awesome taste in naming characters? (I mean I know I've told you about fifty times but still, lol)
As per usual, complex well rounded story with very good characters that's easy to get into and hard to get out of.
Andi





