“Are you to hungry now?” I asked as I wrapped my svelte legs awkwardly around Alex's solid waist and pulled his laden body closer towards me.1
I watched Alex's turbulent tongue caress his splintered lips. His fingers twisting their way inside my tightness. There was a bottle of hot scented oil on the bedside table, but Alex neglected it. He neglect the pain that I felt as his nails pinned my cervix and he began to nimbly work away.2
“Not at all my little meat girl” Alex hissed slipping another vipery finger inside my ravenous walls, smiling diabolically. He bit his venomous tongue. Delighted in my agony and ran his long rooted fingers across my opened gash beginning to rub my plump nub with his coarse thumb. 3
For a stretch I lay in silence plunging my head against the pillow. My shoulders buried underneath the magenta cleaved soaked sheets. 4
Alex had strangled my breath away. The awareness of my ever swelling ripe nipples and his unsympathetic liquid tongue massaging its way around my sensitive aureoles had me shattered underneath his demanding beefy frame. 5
Alex groaned. Rejoining in my silence. 6
Alex had never been much for words during sex from what I had heard from the other girls at the market. But this was an occasion to be savored and I derived in the desire to relish him with praise as his leathery hands wrapped around each of my yielding Breast.7
“My little meat girl,” Alex said topping his prick against my streaming slit. “My girl,”He hushed.8
"Further," I rasped. The titillation of his fingers pressing against the peak of sensitivity below my cervix causing a rippling frenzy to surge throughout my nagging body.9
I had longed to be touched. So long being denied of an orgasm. Only ever being taken to the verge and nullified upon each mens own meal time- of that intense conclusion my sugar sweet juices cascaded10
“Are you going to cum for me meat girl? Alex snarled retreating his soused fingers from the midst my sweltering, sultry cunt.11
Alex seized both of my cherry lips spreading them and in one swift motion nailed his member inside my throbbing walls. His crown caressing it viciously. Hard. Alex dug his chipped nails into my swollen flesh. Squeezing me, arresting me tightly as he defiled me further.12
“Eat me,” I clamored propelling against his body. I held his shoulder blades. One hand wrapped around the nape of his neck, the other embracing him for dear life against his heavy frame. 13
“Fucking eat me.”14
Hearing my words I knew it would draw our session to a conclusion. He could not hold back when it came to his enigmatic desires. His petrifying, cabalistic fantasies. After all I was his bond servant. Sold to him as livestock in the statutory market. The customer was always right and now I knew what was to become of me as Alex's thrall I didn't want to prolong it any longer.15
“ Please,” I pleaded.16
“Eat Me.”
Author notes
I Slaved away over this for a good few hours.
Into the morning as well. So much so my head hurts.
I wanted to scope a bigg3er vocabulary so I did a lot of work finding over descriptive words that would make you feel the story more.
Also from now on as I write a peice I am going to ask you if you may to answer questions.
Did it end right?
&
Did it flow and make sense?
♥
I hope I did a good job
Let me know
In a list
;] <3
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I'll be back later with a better review, I need to go and do something in a dark, dark room.
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Aww, this one's really cute. Imaginative and definitely sexy. I'd really love to see that setting expanded.
Yeah, it made perfect sense, as to the very end we don't really get who or what those two are. The expanded vocabulary suits it really well, it was definitely worth it. Also, that "Eat me, Drink Me" comes from Luis Carrol, i believe?
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Naughty little meat girl deserves to be spanked silly...
Absolutely divine.
This was worth all the hours of slaving, all the headaches, pain, and sleepless nights. I loved this little slice of heaven with every dark, slippery, perverted fibre of my being.
Please write more of this...I'm in desperate need of your talent.
"Alex had strangled my breath away. The awareness of my ever swelling ripe nipples and his unsympathetic liquid tongue massaging its way around my sensitive aureoles had me shattered underneath his demanding beefy frame."
Ah, the beefy lover just tops the whipped cream on the cake.
*Pants at the thought of fucking this man*
Excellent job. You still deserve a good, thorough spanking, for you are naughty.
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Wow... that's definitely a eye-opener
You captured the air for this. And as always, you did a very good job with description *worship*
DarkOneShadow
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That was definately one of your best eroticas, I loved it! I'm not sure splintered lips was the best phrase for that section though but you're the author after all.
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Woh I 'm lost with words woh woh woh
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I feel all embarrassed after reading that. It was very passionate, no doubt about that. It built, um nicely and had a poetic feel. I'm all shocked, but I'm sure it was excellent erotica.
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Yes, it flowed, yes it made sense!
It was poetic as well and I loved that. I like prose writing to be poetic, it needs to be though so many people think otherwise. Especially stories like this and you nailed it.
Andi
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*goosebumps*
This was amazing. I loved your word choice ^-^ so kudos to you staying up late for it lol. I liked the dialogue. It was cool because I could hear their voices all low and whispery. You did a great job with this (:
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