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  • Benwater
    August 22

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    Very interesting. The creativity here on SW is really something else, but this is one of the most unique pieces of literature I've seen on the site!


  • LadyLionnir
    July 23

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    Wow, I've never seen a poem written this way, but I like your style.It's unique and stands out. The storm theme is beautiful. Good work! Keep writing and good luck in the contest!


    • o-EverChanging-o
      July 24
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      It's in Dirty/pretty style, in which the poet emphasises certain parts of the poem, that they deem important, by using spacing, symbols and other embellishments. I've become rather fond of the style...


  • DarkOneShadow
    July 23
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    Nice... I liked this poem

    It was very beautiful and rhymed well. Good luck in the contest.

    DarkOneShadow


  • Andiness
    July 23
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    This si the first I've ever seen @ actually used as at in a POEM...very nice! you go where I've never dared to go with dirty pretty and I love it!!


    E*Y*E*S the (colour) of _T_H_U_N_D_E_R_

    \S\K\I\N\ the {colour} of `\R\A`\I`\N\`


    Those were my favorite lines!

    -Andi



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