GRAYNIGHT, chapter 4, the perfect stranger.

I still can’t get over how weird Peter was before assembly. Since I missed the assembly though because of the little run in I had with Vic, I don’t know, I guess it doesn’t matter. Everyone has their secrets. I guess it’s not my business…it was just so weird. I mean what’s wrong with assembly? He could’ve at least gone and hid behind a pole or something! Gosh…I don’t know…none of my business. 1

Anyway, my first period was English which was…okay. But the worst part was my teacher. Miss Bletcher, but the thing about her is, she is a lesbian. I have nothing against lesbians but…my English class is all girls. I mean what are the odds that the lesbian teacher gets an all girls class? Très akward. 2

“Miss Camilla Leuctra.” Said Miss Bletcher walking to my desk, uh…help. “You are new here, yes?” 3

“Uh…yes.” I replied, she’s creepin’ me out already.4

“Do you speak a second language? Or is it just English.” 5

“I can kinda speak French…” I trailed off.6

“Très bien, bonne chance dans ma classe.” She said smugly. I just looked away and rolled my eyes secretly.7

“Merci…” 8

After my last class I walked out and Peter was there, he smiled. Eep!! We did out usual “hey what’s up? How was class blah blah blah.”9

“So Cam…” he said biting his lip, oh god, what’s happening?10

“Uh, yeah?” I asked.11

“You know how the beginning of term dance is coming up soon? Well…I know we don’t know each other that well and we only just met but I was wondering if…you would go with me?” ah crap! Me+dancing+cute boys=catastrophe!12

“Um…well me and dancing. Not such a good idea…” he started to say something, but I cut him off, “but since it’s you who’s asking, of course I will.” He sighed in relief and smiled. I smiled back. By surprise, I realised I was holding his hand! Did I put that there? Later I will have a long arm to…person talk about where this hand wanders. He looked surprised too, so duh obviously I put it there, great. 13

“Sorry…”I mumbled looking away embarrassed. He laughed.14

“It’s okay.” By now we were near my dorm. 15

Once we parted and I went inside the dorm, I smelled nail polish and nearly gagged. I hate nail polish. 16

“Jeez Mandy! Tryin’ to kill me?” I said, god I hate her and I don’t even know her.17

“That was the point.” She said in her “girly” voice. I just glared at her. “I noticed you were hanging around with Peter, no, not good for your rep.”18

“What rep? I just got here loser.” I said rolling my eyes. She just huffed and went back to her “painting”.19

That night I thought about the dance. But when I slept, I didn’t dream about it. I had nightmares.20

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  • CrystalFairyWings
    September 3
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    Haha, welll done again! loved it!


  • x.SilverHeart.x
    August 27
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    OoOaOh. Lol.

  • Oh, this is getting warmer. I likey.

    I kinda noticed that you put commas mostly, instead of full stops. Maybe you might wanna check that.

    I absolutely loved the last line though, what a cliffy.

  • haha this is funny for some reason...

  • This was cute, but where's Vic?! I think I like him more than Peter even though he was only introduced once in the story so far. lol I can't explain why yet though. Good work on this one, with each chapter you get better and better. Keep it up!

    • Vic comes in more in the next chapter, and then soon he becomes one of them mains Thanks for the comments, im really glad you like it

  • lol go me


  • hsmlover1
    July 24
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    dam they didint add the claps soz just imagine they are there

  • hsmlover1
    July 24
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    im adding these extra claps because i think its worth more than three!

    Count my last claps and these claps and put them togethther and u got 5 claps YAY!!!

    HSM

  • hsmlover1
    July 24
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    awww, peter is so cute. I can reall see this story heading for a good lead to a publishing contaract clary. Im not just saying that becasue you are a storywrite friend im saying this becasue this story creates a visal context you feel like you are right smak bang in the middle of the story setting which is a very gfood thing what most aurthors should look at. Clary your story is putting me in a spence some creepy vibe about peter has me wondering what he really is i want to read more so hurry uo and write the next chapter Lol i love how this story makes your heart sing everytime Paul speaks!

    Well done and i think you can tell how much i like this story. I ill say it agian that i am going to buy it even if i have already read the whole book on here LOL well done

    • haha you have no idea how glad i am that you liked itThank you so much!!!

      Im working on the next chapter now

      Thanks again,
      Clary


  • Chanel xxxx
    July 23
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    Kwl!! Haha aww he asked her to tha dance!!

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