~ A Psychological Disorder ~

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~ A Psychological Disorder ~3

I watched my underwear blowing about on the washing line and I thought to myself, it was a good night last night because at last, the ball was in my court, he’s the man that's been following me and now I have him ensnared.  He’s known as the local kleptomaniac  and a stalker taboo, always there in the shadows watching me, wanting me, I’ve set up my camcorder to frame him and catch him on film doing it, stealing from my washing line.4

It was dark, cold and eerie, I didn’t like it at all walking down the road so late and only wearing my bikini  underneath my threadbare coat.   Strange how I had a doughnut and a banana in one of my pockets though.5

Then I saw him, standing in the shadows, leaning on a wall but somehow, tonight he looked different.  I stepped into a pool of rain water and my shoe fell off, he rushed over to help me and  spoke to me softly in a Dutch accent.  As I held onto a tree like a monkey, my coat slipped open showing my scantily clad body, making his face turn bright red.  I quickly closed it with Speedo and the clock on the town hall Reminded me that I had to hurry.6

As he slipped my shoe Back onto my drenched foot, I smiled nicely, and  asked him back to my place for coffee.  To my surprise he accepted, then a cloud burst opened up from the heaven's above making us run for shelter.  He put his arms around me and pulled me in closer, then kissed me ever so tenderly.  I could smell the perfume of his hair, he must do his cleansing with Aloe Vera and this was the man who was stalking me and stealing from my washing line.7

Then he suggested we got more intimate and proceeded to say to me... “Just lift your leg up a little higher, a bit more, there!  You’ve got it” then he behaved like a Picador.   I was beginning to like this man but I couldn't allow him to steal any more of my underwear, so I peirced his heart with a cold steel blade.  He slumped to the floor in a crumpled heap.  8

Then I awoke from a nightmare scared stiff that I had actually killed someone but I hadn't, it was all in my head.  Hmmmm...I wonder if by tomorrow, my camcorder will have filmed the man who keeps stealing from my washing line?9

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  • LadyMidnight07
    November 23, 2005
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    intresting story.
    lots of random articles,i love it!
    sounds like a dream i would have.
    jk
    congratulation.
    peace

  • JonathanBunn
    September 5, 2005
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    Congrats on the silver!

  • crystaltips
    September 3, 2005
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    lol you did use all the options, however i am tired and will need to read through this again. Lol no sleep and i lost it some where in the middle!! However i will be back when im feeling more awake!

  • johnslw2002
    September 2, 2005
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    This is a cute poem, you was able to incorporate all of the words chosen into your story, great writing with excellant imagination.You were also able to put in a few twists into it also, great job and keep writting