I love the way you love me

I love those little looks you glance my way1

and I love  how you try not to stare.2

I love how you think about me every day3

and that funny thing you do with your hair.4

I love the way you close your eyes,5

every time I kiss you6

My petty coyness can't disguise7

that when we part, I miss you.8

I love how I feel when I'm in your embrace9

so gentle, and guarding, and strong10

and the loving smile that comes to your face11

tells me this cannot be wrong12

All the joys you bring to my heart13

remind me of Heaven above me14

so this I must tell you from the start15

I love the way you love me.16

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  • September 4, 2005
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    this is so sweet if you were standing here i would have to hug you(then get beat up by whatever girl this is for)...check out my poem "momentarily". it would be like the other end of this poem


  • Maatkara
    September 4, 2005
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    This is lovely, Tahuti! You do the best love poems.. she's a lucky lady.

    ~G


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    September 2, 2005
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    Brilliance TRUE GOLD


    Dearest Tahutihotep, how sweet your words
    We all need to walk in the light of love
    Amen, you reveal a heart of compassion appreciation
    In your spirit as wide and vast as the seven seas
    Utter brilliance in your hands and heart of heaven
    I love this line as you sing on
    "I love the way you love me."
    Amazing Grace in your soulful heart and eyes
    When love is our only need
    Beautifully penned once again my new old friend
    As we grow fuller in our hearts and love
    Tis grace and love leading us home above.