Chapter 41
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Jeevan ran all the way home without even looking back. Tears streaming down his face. He seemed to be tripping and falling over all of the branches and rocks on the concrete. He looked down this time to try not to fall over things. While looking down he bumped into something and fell backwards.3
He looked up to see a man standing in front of him. He had long black....freakishly long black hair I might add. It was up to his freaking shoulders! No, I'm kidding, it was up to the back of his knees and as black and black! He had light green eyes. And he didn't look much older than 20. 'Odd...'4
He smiles and held out his hand meaning for Jeevan to take it. Jeevan just looked at his hand saying nothing. The man leaned down onto the balls of his feet, pulling up his long trench coat. Jeevan noticed this and looked at what the older man was wearing. He had on all black. 'Oh, what a coincidence! He could be and assasin!' Jeevan scooted back a little afraid of what the man might do. 5
The man reached out his hand towards Jeevan and Jeevan closed his eyes and flinched. 'Please don't hit me, please don't hit me' Jeevan thought, but instead of pain he heard a soft, medolic (Is that even a word? -Laughs-) well, lets say silky voice say, 6
"Hi, I'm River and I didn't mean to scare you."
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It was okay, like you said too short, but hectic schedules don't help with writing stories. Jeevan seems a little jumpy, his character in the first chapters gave the impression of him being the angry-emotional type, not really one to cower. Gaaahhh! Stop making good cliff-hangers!! I want to know about River!
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Thanks. -Smiles- The reason he's cowering is because he usually has this big facade around him yknow? And Emlen broke through that facade and now that he was leaving and most likely never going to see him again, it cumbled and he is now vulnerable. -Laughs- Thanks for reading my story...
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